Reincarnated as a snake?

Just another reincarnation story, so if you have good ideas, suggestions or just complains let me know. I think this story could become something great...
Feel free to write some comments and reviews!
And don´t forget to stay healthy!

This is a good novel.                                                                  
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Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haven't started it yet but I hope he's venomous you'd be shocked how little people use venom or poison. and for someone like me who love snake's its just ridiculous.

So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's.
pro
- It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it.
- the action is ok.

con
- the grammar is horrible.
- obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse.
- The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying.
- Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic.
- The system and leveling lacks detail.
- The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening.
- Again things happen just to happen..

I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5

Wow! What an amazing novel. Keep it up! I especially like your style, but your storytelling is also very nice! I am waiting for the next story!