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Honestly this novel is so good. I love the romance genre and I was looking for some new non harem r 18 novels and I found this. I started reading this at like 9 pm and I couldn’t stop reading until I reached the end. So here I am currently writing a review at 12:33 am. Anyway if anybody reads this you guys should really give this book a try it’s really amazing. I have no complaints
If you wanr your brain to leave this planet, this is definitely the story for you.Mc is the most dumbest person yoh will read about so far.
Overall and good points:So far, it is the typical transmigration story with a system. It is however, not a revenge story and the aim for now is to survive. The background setting is quite interesting family wise. On top of that, the content is quite easy to comprehend. Nevertheless, what makes this story interesting is unique and unexpected antagonists and plot changes- the silver lining of this book. The thing about this book that I really appreciate is the presence of intrigue and calculations on what could have happened and why things happen. A sort of human behavior prediction. Cons: It is hard to call the style as outstanding, not to mention triggering curiosity is rather hard in beginning chapters. Character could be more developed, there is a lot of wasted potential, especially with what happened to bell, whilst the unexpectedness is quite entertaining, I see an ark wasted. Also, the dialogues make it hard to immerse fully as they sound as though taken from a modern setting and a bit bland or too explanatory. Another thing that turned me off, was how easy the character gained points. There should be a more gripping, heart throbbing journey. Maybe because it’s the beginning, I can’t seem to get excited. Additionally, other than the mc journey being too easy is the lack of any sort of moral compass. I can’t see the difference between the mc and scum. Adding this after reading chapter 8, but I really cannot see cliff hangers and conflicts get resolved too easily. It’s like the ark ended before it began.Advice :Perhaps, add more flavor to the character such as stoic, lively, cold, passionate, devious, scheming etc. i know it is a character setting on its own but the mc seems bland. And add more conjunctions and sentence structure variation so the readers doesn’t get bored. Stop wasting arks and plot points. Also, this one is probably me, but I am really tired of demon gods.
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5 stars for the fact that the author fixed the typo in the first chapter, probably.
A decent read. I enjoyed it. Though slow initially but it started picking up the momentum after a while. Kept me occupied during the covid lockdown. Keep up the good work
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This guy is responsible for Aus fireThis Novel is unique..I just hope other trash novel don't get picked...................
I liked the beginning a lot because I felt that there was a lot of good translation and there was even the exciting plot development which made me look forward to the future
The starting was slow boring to say won't be a strech but the way story and the character develops is amazingI would have never expected this to end like a epic story amazing this story gives the vibes of ling tian or his marshal father is very similar but this one is more connected and mc is not an idiot very scheming and profiteering mcLovely story absolutely recommendedThis needs to be selected for translation