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Although I have barely got up to chapter 8 and haven’t ever wrote a review, today I felt like doing just that. To start off I like how the Mc is a comedian and has a mischievous personality, also about how you write in a different perspective then others( such as it mainly just the character thoughts and he’s not talking out loud, kinda like a diary + nice touch with the Dice POV?).But mainly I feel like there’s plot missing because you haven’t explained what currently is the “top players” level and I feel that the mans leveling speed is fast as hell, so I don’t know if this is gonna be a short novel(100 chapters or so)but I’m enjoying it?
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It was really well writen i feel as thinthe begining went a little fast in some parts but the points all came through nicely overall great story cant wait for the continuation
Wow when you die and the woman you love is reincarnated and gives birth to you.. Dang man thats freaking crazy. I think the character building and the friendships in this book is great so far but im only currently at Chalter 130.
