I like the scientific view of magic in the story. Even though the setting of the story is of another novel, I still like it overall. I can't wait for more chapters. ?
One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.
I don't think I need to say anything, just by reading the title everyone who has read CNs can guess that this is a generic cliche CN trash novel.
After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review.Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias.It’s a wonderful and interesting story.I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here.As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things.[Sp0iler Alert]*Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers*Firstly;The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally.Secondly;The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobilityThirdly;Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly;The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actionsLastly;The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review.Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be.That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character moreHe’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MCHe behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this.Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic.The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standardsBut, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed.Answer 3:This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie.If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route.As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out.Answer 4: The MC is very smart.If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well.Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence.Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MCUnknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action.Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid.Answer 5:At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters.But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced.I certainly hope you enjoy this story.Cheers
New Concept of Cultivation and System is always appreciated. WRITING QUALITY--- One of the in my collection!?STORY DEVELOPMENT--- Very Good pace and there are many Plot twists as we move further. ?CHARACTER DESIGN--- This is one of Best Asset of this Story.?UPDATING STABILITY--- It is Regular and Timely. ☺️WORLD BACKGROUND--- Very Nicely arranged and described.(also my favourite) It is not like those Complicated Ones and It is quite easy to understand this one.?ADVISE--- [READ IT NOW BECAUSE IT IS WORTH IT] ?
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Good story, I am wondering how this review system works for the books since you need a minimal of 120 words. I dont have much to say about the book since I am flipping pages and still continuing to read. I did enjoy it.
hope this gets picked up because the MTL is really rough lmao...stuff like "I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot
I can only say that it is at the isekai level of wish satisfaction. At first it seems that the MC is promising but around 40 chp everything starts to lose meaning. Very poorly made harem, similar to a harem isekai. The MC only wins the others because his level of cultivation is above; He does not know sword techniques (etc), nor pills, formation, forging, etc.Summary: Find another
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style. Add it on your library now and let's find out how Han Jing would fare in the app Races: Online! Good luck, author-sama! I'm not saying you should update often, but you should! ? We're waiting for the next chapters~ ?
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