It's different is a good way; Mafia plot: checkScary MC: checkOverpowered: check (but not in the usual way)Cute child/Family that keeps MC grounded: check
What do you guys think about this story so far
Very nice ? ................................................................................................................................................................
Read the first chapter and I'm a fan. This is most definitely collection worthy. I'm hoping to see more worldbuilding elements in the later chapters, but so far its a hit.
good novel with peak humor and a solid story. love it ❤
Not bad. Cant wait to see how much it grows in the future. The main character seems interesting and I cant wait to see how Zephyr grows. The goddess is also a really interesting character.
For those who have read 'Stolen by the Rebel King', this book is the prequel that happens one generation before the events of SBTRK. While both stories are stand-alone novels (meaning you do not need to read one to understand the other), there will of course be a couple of small spoilers here and there if you read one before the other. It's nothing that will spoil the reading experience, of course, but the dots would just be connected way quicker!For those who have waited for a sequel to SBTRK, so sorry this is late. But hey, better late than never, right? [awkward laughter]As for new readers, hello and welcome! I do hope you'll enjoy this story. While waiting for the updates, feel free to check out SBTRK first. I promise it will be a hell of a ride. ❤️
"The contrast between Ethan’s arrogance and Emily’s grounded nature made for an interesting dynamic. I also loved the friendship with Anna and the loyalty of John. A solid, enjoyable read."
I'm writing this review at 10 chapters so far, and this book is heading in the right direction. However, I do want to leave some feedback as I want this book to flourish.So far this book has started out quite strongly, although it introduces a lot of characters quite fast. World building so far is top notch, with an actual sense of mystery and excitement for what is going to happen.Only feedback to give is that the pacing is a bit slow, but that's not too bad and even makes it intriguing to me.Good job! excited to see where it goes
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This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
After reading this story up to chapter 72, all I can say is that it’s good. The flow of the story is easy to understand, and the main character is refreshing. The dialogue is also well done. This is my favorite book so far. Keep up the good work, and I hope this book continues to be as enjoyable ??