Guardians : Awakening of Athena

Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels. while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy.I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters. Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.

The story... What should I say... After the first chapter I was already tempted to drop it but I persisted through all 40 free chapters.My short review would be: the first 15 or so chapters (except for the first ~2) had the ability to make me laugh because of some nice side characters that got me some comical relief. Sadly when the mc moves towards his next target he leaves them behind (like I said: side characters). ⭐????The story is about an OP military male that comes out of prison after a mission and sees his family in peril. Now he's out for revenge. It's the cliche face slapping. He goes around seeking revenge on family after family. Those "esteemed" families feel offended by his actions and his brute force, things escalate and the family gets eradicated. Many things also involve his adopted sister but surprise surprise they are actually in love.You should not that the genre of this novel is magical realism. In general everything seems "normal" but the MC and his strongest subordinates (of course generals from the military) have some cultivation kind of martial arts skills. (MC can crush people with his aura if he for once doesn't decide to beat them up himself.)Character design and development... There isn't any of it really. Mc seems shallow and nowhere like a military person should seem. He has anger and control issues and seems very superficial. There isn't much information about the world background, just that the MC is the almighty and every military person looks up to him etc. There are also loopholes in general that aren't really explained (yet). Like he was framed by his business partner that landed him in prison for 5 years and then a strong guy picked him up and like this he somehow got into the military where he now has unimaginable high achievements etc but at the same time it was said he went to military for a top secret reason and nobody knew about this or that he was in the military before jail time.If you're searching for a short break from your current novels but don't want to start a complete new one that you have to finish eventually because it's too good, the first few chapters of this novel might be just right (if you like cliche face slapping and can bare with not so deep characters). You definitely won't get attached. If you want something worth your coins... Better not.I think it's kinda sad because the general plot could be a pretty good face slapping novel if done perfectly. Sadly the author lacks the ability.

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The story is well designed as far as I have read, the grammar and structuring need some serious work, and the character creation is a nice change from a mc that is always stupidly righteous.

Reviewing for the sake of Free FP keep up the good work.

I Love this novel, only if it could update at least once a week it have the potential to be in the top rankings. The story development is slow but never did i end up dropping it, because the plot, the charcters and the schemes are very very intricate, even the psychology of the charcter. this story isn't really romace(no clichetgings to be seen here, women here are the top dogs). The psychology of the charcter is well balance, no major swings. You can actually ship the characters you like but you will be unable to identify who the lucky chap is. This story revolves around vengance, it has schemes that only woman can come up with, its a story empowered by women, no OP and unending cultivation here, no unexpected powers here, probably the most magical thing here is how the mc revived in anothers body and the coincidence that she happens to be extremely intelligent. I have given up the tought of guessing the outcome of every move in the story. The mc is not being spoilt by the creator and actually gives her, her own failures. The romance here actaully very mellow but very engaging ,giving you a thought of "man no..." , "kiss kiss kiss kiss