Never seen a novel like this to my liking. It’s a new experience of characters and setting with unpredictable story. I love it and I recommend if you like action and adventures.
Author here, this story is my first time doing one. It's slower than most stories due to my writing style. However, I think you will still enjoy it.
What kind of fight did i just read the fight was nothing short of phenomenal. The sheer intensity, the raw emotions, the stakes—everything about Hakan vs. Vaelzaryon was mind-blowing. From the very first moment, I was completely hooked,he world-building? Incredible. The power system? Flawless. But what truly sets this story apart is how it balances overwhelming action with deeply emotional moments.’ve read a lot of battles in my time, but never have I felt a fight quite like this. It wasn’t just a fight—it was a moment in history. A perfect blend of action, tension, and emotional weight. If the story keeps up this level of quality, it’s going to be unstoppable.Don’t disappoint me—because right now, this is shaping up to be one of the best stories I’ve ever experienced.
This book is a great addition to the genre, blending action, adventure, in a World that became a "game". It feels really refreshing to read, and is just at the right place between originality and mainstream.The grammar is generally well-done, with clear words that aren't overly complicated for non-native English speakers. There are a few typos here and there, but they don’t detract from the overall experience. The author clearly puts effort into improving, as the latest chapters's quality is increasing every day.Character development is a point that is difficult to rate, as we've mostly seen Sora for now. We delve into the character's thoughts quite often, and it's easy to grow attached to him. I'll read future chapters to see how it goes for new characters.The story development is steady, and the pacing strikes a good balance between action and quieter, reflective moments. So far, I love the world building and the simple yet efficient concepts that rule the world.The writing style is one of the things I like in this novel. The fights aren't 5 chapters long, we are not spammed by the sounds of swords clinging, or have random Young Master jumping from out of nowhere to get face slapped. The dialogs feel good to read, the descriptions are good, and the emotions conveyed sometimes triggered a reaction in me. The author might be new, but I can feel the intention to write something really good.It might not please everyone, but I must say it is worth giving it a chance. The story starts well, but it gets even better as you read more and more.
I'm very excited for this story. Since there's only a few chapters out, it's really going to be very difficult to wait, but I cannot wait for more chapters.
This is really good don’t give up or drop it just keep going and people will catch on
This is a refreshing take of a villainess changing troupe . The FL is very appreciative of what she has now...Please update it more....??
Wait your alive, goddamn bro
I love this book?... but need it to be updated I've been waiting ?
I like how the story has progressed so far but it’s also quite confusing as you don’t exactly understand what’s going on. But LOOKS like a fantastic read, so I will keep on reading.
Very good first chapter ca envisages a good for the following and I hope to have a big revenge from the protagonist carrement I had tears for him if there is an adaptation in webtoon I will be the first to see the pictures I hate to see how it will return.
I love The Plot Since its different from Most of the novels,of course it would be better with More Updates