I know its too early to add a review even though I just started reading but I really wanted to convey to the author that the story, even though its just the classic Virtual Reality Video Game genre started out pretty uniquely. .. But. ..bwuhahahha there's always a but huh? but then, the grammar is a little rough around the edges. .. I dont hold that against you author. .. its just that.I haven't been reading lately and I just started reading yours so Im overly sensitive to such grammar issues. Anyways keep it up! Your doing great!