Albus let out a breath and got up. She could sense August being in another room and Mandy was making coffee while various food items floated into shelves and sorted themselves out. In this shape Mandy didn't look frightening, but that ability was scary as heck - Albus had not lost a unicorn's sensitivity to aether flow and to her it looked like dark alignment threads like those of a spider spread out from Mandy's back and did all the work with ease. Albus could do something similar, but only one thing at a time, yet here Mandy was - precisely adjusting force and moving ten things at a time without even looking. With ease, seeming like her mind was elsewhere at that.
The things Leum said were-- well, yes. Albus blushed, feeling sorry for the dragon and also… hoping August wouldn't ask him to do the same about something he didn't want to tell-- but peeking at August, Albus could tell that August hadn't expected a response like this. He didn't think it was possible, but August's presence thinned out even more, now there not being even a human presence there.
Cling!
You have slain...
2. The beginning of the story makes no sense, along with no grammar and no details.
Rob Lucci
The novel is barely readable. The mc is pretty low-key, but is pretty dull and isn’t the smartest for a transmigrator. Translation is inconsistent. There are some terms switched around. For example, on the mc’s proficiency panel his rank for his skill keeps changing from entry to beginner to novice. There's a lot of that happening with other words. Also, it’s kinda dumb that the mc doesn’t use the pills he concocts to help raise his realm but uses spirit stones instead. There’s no explanation why he doesn’t do that, which seems kind of stupid. Instead, it’s explained that cultivators use spirit stones to cultivate, which makes sense, but what’s the point of pills then? It’s just a plot hole that’s so obvious that it’s annoying.
This novel is an outstanding piece of literature, compelling from the very first sentence to the closing one. The author’s storytelling expertise shines in the richly developed characters and detailed plot. Every twist and turn kept me hooked, making it impossible to put the book down. The prose is both eloquent and easy to read, painting vivid pictures that immerse you in the story.
Ahem writing first review, still only three chapters but i support author-san, lets see future update of this novel, excited
thanks for hardworking. This is a good novel.You must read.And Thank you for continuing the translation.We will wait new updates.Have a nice day
Whoaaaaaaaa!? I'm Already so Hooked up with Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower! now there's another sequel story of that novel! Now I can't help to wait anymore! Author-san is really giving us such good stories ? I'm Sure like FLBF story this story will also swooon us over the moon! Thank you author-san for your dedicated hardwork ... and hook us up like glue to your story! ??
This is all I can say for nowto apply for contract Just provide the following in word(document) file Book name:. THE DEVILS ADVOCATE Writer name: SAMUEL JULIUS Country: Nigerian Contract type (Exclusive or Non-Exclusive): exclusive Genre: romance Status (Completed or Ongoing): ongoing For Ongoing books: The number of words the author has written so far: 50k The number of chapters the author has written so far: 37 Estimated number of words; 100_120k Estimated number of chapters: 100 chapters For completed books: Word count: 100k words Chapters count: 100 chapter's Page view (For non-exclusive only): Super-link (For non exclusive only; story link of the novel on other platforms): Is the author willing to change the title (for promotion purposes) once approved? __ YES WITH DUE RESPECT Synopsis: First ten Chapters