John Doe: A Nobody in Space.

Around chp 200 and so the MC is so fking stupid. They have bikes, more than enough food, guns and superpowers yet they still fking follow other victims, just to get caught by the Lee corporation and become a member of their army? What fking stupid shit is this. They have nothing to write so they just add in fillers. You might say this is a turning point of the story, but it's written in a fking idiotic and stupid way. Fk this stupid story. Don't read. It'll make you go crazy of how stupid the MC is.

Pretty good, but... you're not consistent. Your description of the main character differs from the psychological portrait of a typical special unit soldier.I recommend some good literature first.

I think this is the Author's best book. Even if the start might seem slow, the buildup is thorough, and the MC seems to know his disadvantages and advantages.

A better summary I made for the novel after reading 40 chapters:Our protagonist is an average joe in his final year at a Medical University. One day, he gets lucky and obtains a Daily sign-in system that gives him rewards such as surgery skills, expensive watches, storage space, etc. Simultaneously, he also gets a text in the same day from a girl claiming to be his daughter who tells him the school belle is his future wife. He believes what she says to be the truth after video calling her and noticing that she has strikingly similar features to the school belle. The two agree to team up, and his future daughter sets him up with some advice to woo her mother, the school belle.What he doesn't know, however, is that both his "future wife" and his "future daughter" are two girls he used to be friends with in the past. They are just teaming up so that he can be together with the school belle.

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