ShadowPhoenix05SAa
It’s the humour for me, every word Vector says has me cracking up, author did well.
First of all, go write your own review! Lol..., anyways, mandatory shameless 5 stars review is a must. About the book? Oh yeah, it's going to be plenty steamy and hot, just grab your pop corns and ahem..., nevermind. It's a great read, try it out and see. Also, I'm here, you can comment or ask any question you want.
Finished this book using Patreon. I cried. Ugly tears. So so good. You love the guys. You hate them. And in the end you love all of them again. ??? now moving to amazon kindle to read the rest of this authors works because shes awesome ?
Embark on an epic journey of cultivation, magic, and fierce battles. A must-read for fans of thrilling power-ups and intense character growth. I c an'tmiss out!
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So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's. pro- It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it.- the action is ok.con- the grammar is horrible.- obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse.- The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying.- Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic.- The system and leveling lacks detail.- The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening. - Again things happen just to happen.. I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5
i already loved the introduction! the writing style is entirely understandable and ready to read with a touch of humor and there that perfectly describes the main character's thoughts. i think the flow as well is not too fast, not too slow, which is a perfect balance because the story itself is already good so we get more hooked. the system is also really unique, but not difficult to grasp. its suited for many young male readers (or females too). keep it up, author!
Not bad so far, gotta see where all this goes
Coooool , waiting soon for next
that was.. interesting. I don't hate it, and the updates are frequent!
The story is good . .. .. the plot is also great . .. .but just one request , start powering up the mc . .. .. keep it up and PLEASE DON'T DROP.
This webnovel shows a lot of promise. Updating it every five days and the next day after it might not be a good stable update in my opinion, but the quality of the book itself is very amazing. However, just in case I just want to let the writer know one thing: Please, don't become edgy and try to use things for shock value, but from what I've read, it's a masterpiece.
