I don’t get the reviews criticizing the MC for not cultivating 16 chapters in. I mean it’s only 16 chapters. Within 16 standard length chapters, you can either establish MC personality and background or have the MC be a monotone bore with no real reasoning but already OP. A well developed MC is better. Overall, this story is starting with an interesting concept. There is an opportunity for more exploration on the psychological development of the MC, as it’s brushed on, but so far, not integrated to the level it could be.