Good start. If he continues like this, I think it will hold. I hope the author doesn't drop it. Anyway, let's go.??????????????
I was really excited to read because of pansexual MC and then very disappointed because of how the first 2 potential MLs (I assume) acted. First, automatically treating him as a bottom. That's a very rude assumption. Second, acting possessive and jealous when MC has never given any identification he's interested in either of them. Third, the MC being oblivious in addition to a line foreshadowing that in the future he'd regret not realizing. So frustrating! It's not like he has absolutely no experience with these things! Lastly, these freaking idiots can't understand that he's completely focused on the upcoming apocalypse and really doesn't care AT ALL about romance? It was interesting at first but I'm dropping it now, MCs and MLs like this make me want to punch a wall...
The story is excellent...............................................I just hope that you don't pace it too fast..................................This story is good when you look for it as a long term story....ATB I will cheer you as a reader
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Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!
I don't remember how i stumbled on this novel (actually i do,but i think that's not to relevant), I've read my fair share of "transmigrated/reincarnated" type of novels so I think i can somewhat be fair in this review. While the starting is generic like in most novels of this type (except for the part where the MC is an artist? maybe..) the first few chapters are kinda chaotic,i think is reflecting the MC not adapting to the "new reality" and maybe it's a "throw off" for some of the readers, but then it get better. The "system" has his own "personality" so to say (and maybe it doesn't want what's best for you all the time),the powers are "gifts" and can be somewhat transferred,and from chapter 14 you starting to get clues about the main plot and the pacing of the story starts to ramp up. I've given 4.4/5 ? cuz i liked the story so far. For those who likes "transmigration" type give it a chance..it really gets better and it has a somewhat unique approach on the "genre" for the rest my advice is to read till chapter 10-12 before making an opinion,also the synopsis doesn't really do justice to the story.For those who survived reading till here,in my defence i had no idea that from a simple review I'll go on a rant this much...Wish you all the best!!
I read your other novel and it was great so I am expecting this book to be a great story too even though I'm not reading it yet. But don't push yourself too hard and take some rest if you need it. We would rather have a short hiatus rather than a long hiatus because you are sick after all.
I have only read 15 chapters and I think it is shaping up to be a great novel. I don't read a lot of video game fiction, but, something about this really hooks me. The story is fun without making it too convuluted. Cheers!
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Well what could I say.... I read the whole book (about 95) in a little more than a day... The MC actually thinks and his brain isn't just a decoration. The Oracle's Bracelet may seems a "simple" system but it's a little different: it's more similar to assistant to reach your own personal destination, something like Google Maps in a sense (kind of similar to the karmic system in a certain way). The background world is well constructed, each chapter flies, never boring nor "heavy". This story is worth the candle and I decided I'll support it as much as I can. Keep up the awesome work author!!!