Another interesting idea poorly written. I liked how the author did the 'Everyone on earth was sent to another world' idea. Instead of everyone having their own plot of land (which I never really cared for), instead they're sent in groups of 1000 I believe it was. But the author CANNOT keep his information straight. In the beginning everyone is told they have one week to get to level 10, or Die, but by chapter 40 I believe 5 days have passed and the highest level is 4, and the 'one week or die' was never mentioned again. The MC's first ability gave him increased stats and the ability to increase his stats by eating the monsters/beasts. But the author can't seem to keep the MC's stats straight, never telling how (or even if) the MC is distributing them, forgetting what he said they were in previous chapters, etc. And as for the other people, they're so poorly written and one-dimensional the story would've been better without them. And finally there are a few missing chapters, that were all added on in the end. I can see why this wasn't picked up, so there's only 40 chapters here.
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similar to im actually a cultivation bigshot! but different enough chapters 1 to 116 are really good 117 jumps around a bit and changes where people were said to be almost like they were confused and couldn't remember the past few chapters details after that little arc end and we get back to the main character suddenly his attitude actions and whole vibe do a 180 its like another author took over but he just wasn't as good or he decided to just change the whole setup without any reason or explanation two people who could be considered part of his household and somewhat close to are now strangers who he is thinking rude, and contradictory to previous attitude, thoughts towards with no sense of the closeness they previously showed towards each other then there is a bit of deja view when they acknowledge that this is their second deal then go through the same script more or less word for word as if they were meeting for the first time.In conclusion really good and recommend until about chapter 116 then it just goes downhill and ruins all previous good impression.
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While the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)
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The story is great and really entertaining. I am quite glad that MC first beast is not something with a divine beast bloodline. Looking forward to the development of this story. I sincerely hope that it would be picked and published soon.
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I really enjoy reading this book. Can you give me the raw links with uncensored content? I check but no chance... The chapter is edited and there's less content on the raw site. ?
Liked the characters of the previous realm. Hope they meet the sect master soon...................................................................
Unlikeable, cringy, nationalistic fantasy. There's nothing good about this. A pointless discipleship novel set in a somewhat modern world (a couple decades ago I think).Honestly Chinese nationalism is so disgusting, you won't see a sane man from any other country write anything like this. It's technically wish fulfilment but the wish fulfilment of some deranged chinese dude. If I transmigrated into this protagonist I'd just end myself on the spot, it's that bad.I don't know what words I should use to describe this worthless abomination, no novel has ever left me this speechless. I feel like the score I'm giving this is too high since I've given novels that are 100x better the same score, I'd give it a negative number if I could. 0/5