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it all started pretty well, but then the author began to build a plot in the style of "what is my mighty China." I won’t be surprised if the author of this book blowjob on himself. I do not recommend this book for reading.
Season 1 was so much fun for me to write, and I'd like to think I have created a good trio of main characters and an array of side characters that should spark some fun stories in the future!Season 2 will follow the journey of our trio as they journeyed to yet a much bigger and badder superhuman city of the world! Jon will confront with his enemies old and new and the world as we know it grows every bigger!I haven't been this excited about writing in a long time! Here's to a fun time ahead!
Very disappointed that ufffcufffcufffcPlague Doctor wasn’t picked, this light novel is from the same author (if my sources are correct) so I have high expectations that this could be a very great novel~ ?(Reviewed this before reading hope this doesn’t disappoint) ?????????????????????????????????
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Translation Quality:Some sentences are hard to read because of how they are translated.Stability of Updates:This is one star as I haven't seen how often they will update this story when it goes live.Story Development:The story is developing at a decent quality but the pace seems a bit rushed at times.Character Design: Very few characters are original and the ones that are all seem to be lacking a quality that makes them human.World Background:We all know Warcraft's world background and the author makes a good go at using said background, I would like to know how the author intends to make it their own before I can increase the score.
Writing this review after finishing the first volume (100 chapters).Positives:- Dark and gritty, with a mature writing style- Unpredictable - things don't always go the MC's way, or the way you're expecting- Refreshing - in a very oversaturated "system" genre, the author manages something very different - There is a decent balance of significant plot events and slice of life sections- The world grows with the MC, there aren't any overwhelming knowledge dumps - I personally enjoy the insight in the authors comments, demonstrating their thoughts, opinions and growth as an authorNegatives:- Can be confusing at times- As a weak MC, he spends a distressing amount of time injured- MC seems to lack any motivation outside of staying alive so far, spending most of his time following the whims of those stronger than him - hoping this will change at some point
Could barely bring myself to read more than 10 chapters. The first chapter actually hooked my because of the writing quality but the story development is just waaaaay too rushed in my opinion. Also I think the author just contradicts himself. First it seems like magic is a rare talent and only few can learn it and the main character just learns it in a matter of seconds (yes it might be a life and death situation) but still being able to "master" it in 1 chapter seems like a waste. Also I think the MC is pretty dull so was nothin for me, sorry.
