Your story is beautiful, but you have to make some grammatical adjustments to it, you can learn from it and in the end you will become a good writer ?
Now!! what can I say? this novel has everything I want to read and I would appreciate it if there would be more novels like this ??
Great story very funny, great characters, multiple distinct personalities, interesting story development, love the spider carriage, character interactions, great world details, refreshing writing quality. I'm going to keep on reading this.
this actually seems really interesting and has great potential. it's on an event for New books, so there are only limited chapters but so far it's good, and the writing quality is well above others. I will definitely have this one for later!!! right from the start you can feel the tension in the air, and I hope to see her growth as well as her gain, as she starts out as spoiled, but that is not a reason to wrong her like they do. keep it up and in hope you finish it. I'll keep it on my list to read. Readers- give it a try! Author- good luck!!!
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
This review is a quick reminder to you all - I can and will be bribed by win-win unlocks, gifts, GT and Power Stones. So if you want me to update more and faster, make sure you bri...I mean, send them my way...And also, enjoy this story.
ohh how i love this novel it has got everything i ever wanted main character is so cute . the other characters are superb so far .i have binge read all the chap that were free i will recommend this to everyone whos hesitating.
No! maybe more than that, maybe it's an Immortal type.
Hah, human world, what a wonderful world? If i can go to the human world thats will be awesome....
"Kaenji! Can you not talk about anime for 5 minutes?"
10 minutes passed as she stabs the last broken lords and rips him apart from the chest area to his head.
Bruce stumbled as the Quinjet's hanger door open, letting the air in with a massive swoosh. Looking at Natasha, who'd activated the ship's autopilot so she could walk up to the man, screamed passed the wind, "What are you doing?!"