some of these titles really crack me up!
The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
The story was well written, the vocabulary was beautiful and easy to understand, maybe it's just the paragraphs that seem long for a webnovel. Still, it's good enough for the most part. Just need to practice a lot and enjoy the moment of writing ideas that rarely others can do. Don't mind what people think while you enjoy the process of writing it. Because in the end it's all about finding happiness and you probably already know how to find it. Good job, Author.
the story is good and the character is amazing
I'm actually very surprised at how much I like this book it's an amazing story so far I'm at the beginning of chapter 107
If you like battle Animangas with a unique power system and a great cast of protagonists and antagonists, TWC is for you! The novel has an outstanding plot and narrative as it delves to show two sides that aren't necessarily evil but are against eachother fighting against the Eclipses, the monsters within the story.If you like unique character arts, this novel is for you too! I'm a pretty okay artist but i wish to bring my novel to life through my own hand made art ?
It’s rlly funny while also still having some substance and making it an interesting read. I rlly like how the mc superpower is like bc it is op but also has its limits like how sometimes he doesn’t know wut it will hit or wut it will do
Here to give some advice!!First thing you have to fix is to slow down the story the way I see it right now is that everything is going to fast.Second is the character thinking and speaking try to put this “thinking” and this as ‘speaking’ it helps or you can look online to find what is better to suit you.Three it seems that all the characters are speaking in one paragraph you should fix that no one’s want to read multitudes characters in one paragraph which it’s confusing for a lot of readers.Fourth dont rush the story it seems that you are just putting what comes to mind which is good but put some logic into it and put some background story or some context of other characters like the first chapter i had no idea what was happening try to understand form the reader point of view we don’t understand what your thinking so the only way to show it is to explain to the reader what is happening but not to much info because no one likes it. “Good luck”Not my first language so sorry for not understanding it.Try to learn from other people work it helps.
Incredible novel written by mythical hands. If you're looking for a fantasy novel it's the best option in the app. But read carefully because background of this novel is pretty deep. Quite enough updating. That's what i call the perfect.
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It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.