COME GAIN EXP

what about u making a routine dear author, like u give us update only on those days in a week, because we always wait when u r going to update?. u know!

I find the males here to be really pathetic no one soulfully loves their partners otherwise they won't do what they have done even if Louis lost his memories but heart and soul how could he just gave in without waiting for his proper recovery and rest they have their mind and memories intact

Uh. I feel like I’ve been deceived. There was never anything in the synopsis about the MC being in the mafia ;-;                           

Author when are you gonna update this novel? ._.a or is this novel dropped?                                                                              

This is more like an 'inspired' novel from⁷ "Birth Of the Demonic Sword" from the dragon fight to the guards teaching him, all of it. Being inspired by a novel and making your own base on that is completely fine, but getting completely influenced is also bad. Your novel just feels like another iteration of "BoDS" it's insane how similar it is. Just from reading this i already know you're a big fan of "BoDS" This is more like a fanfic than anything. Sorry but except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability, I'll give the others a one star. I hope you can carve your own mold someday.

The way the story flows is good, the development of the MC is not slow, the relationship between the characters is funny and interesting, the world is not clear to me but it looks good, it deserves a rating of 4.4