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Have read till Chapter 54.Writing quality - 5/5 - Great quality of writing.Story Development - 3/3 - Pretty boring all things said. The MC just follows behind Tang San. I know that isn't bad but he literally changed nothing much. His dialogues with other characters is minimal and he literally spends most of his time cultivating. Good points of this story was his determination of not killing soul beasts for spirit rings and having a decent MC that isn't desperate for Harem. At the same time, I feel that MC is asexual, as there is no love interest or even mention that he finds anyone interesting in a romantic way.Character Design - 3/3 - Bland MC. The MC always maintains a distance with everyone, being overly 'polite' in every scene. The MC always stays polite except for few times like when Xiao Wu was injured by Zhao Wuji during the test. MC wanting to keep to the OG timeline is really unreal, he is always mindful of how he would affect the story, that he does nothing to change things deemed 'helpful' for Shrek Seven. I would have liked a bit more originality and creativity here, as it seems a bit forced. Updating Stability - 5/5 - No commentWorld Background - 5/5 - It's Soul land, one of my favourite ff world background.Overall - 4.2/5.0 - Great for casual reading and for those who do not know OG Soul land 1.
Very good story line and story progression, very excited for what the future holds, definently need more chapters as soon as possible?.
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This is unreadable. It is genuinely worse than MTL. Imagine reading an MTL where someone edits half the names to the first thing that comes to their mind. Then you have scratched the service of how bad it is. I have no idea how anyone can read this without losing their minds.
Really interesting concept. One of the best novels of this batch, and it is similar to the AFK concept. It's kinda like a combination of a death game and AFK simulator, and it's done really well. It's one of the only novels that makes me feel like it's special. It's not one of the best written novels, nor does it have the best characters, but it's truly unique. I hope you can give it a try.
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This story feels rushed I and I believe others would be able to enjoy this story more if you, the author, put more time working on the base of your story. It has an interesting plot that personally interested me but from what I have read is being, and I mean well when saying this, terribly executed. The utter lack of details of the power system is annoying one chapter the mc is level 10 the next he saying he's basically level 25, which would be cool in all if we were told what he did to get to that level. We never see the mc fight like ever. The mc has a master class that allows to forcibly enslave from what we know any being and he gets 50% exp from their kills but we never get told how much exp a being gives which in turn just makes it feel like the author just levels them up conveniently. It is also said that the levels get increasingly hard to level up after certain marks for instance at level 25 it get harder and then 50 and so and so forth but the mc and his slaves seem to be leveling up even faster than before. I also seen that the author planned this story all the way up to volume 9 which I was originally excited about but you honestly wouldn't be able to tell if he just thought of on the spot none of this story seems well thought out. And don't even get me started on the fact that every interaction the mc has is with a girl and they conveniently have amazing potential. I have seen people put more effort into fanfics than this story and I'm not trying to discredit the author but its just what I get when I read your story. Its a pure wishfulfilment story. The author put most of his effort into describing his characters which doesn't matter if their setting is a blank canvas.
i read up to chapter 30... it good... better one out of all the rubbish,it have comedy, serious moment as well as a decent plot.one of a few i want to pass the selection!
Review up to ch57The world building is pretty good and there are plenty of unique things but it's rather inconsistent and the author didn't simply use a ton of references from the real world, he straight up named almost everything after existing stuff, be it names, brands or even specific things from animes and games. The MC seems to utilize his knowledge from his past life quite well but at the same time he got a lot of stuff handed to him on a silver plate just cause the author said so through completely unnatural situations (though there were hints that such occurrences might have a reason not disclosed up to the chapter I read).I like antihero MCs but decided to drop this one after he straight up manipulated his past life girlfriend into liking him again as if he hadn't screwed up before, without even taking his time to try and get her to know him again to see if things would end up well, he just kissed her out of nowhere which shows he has no morals, he just does whatever the f he wants and does not abide by any rule (which is also noticeable from other situations, not just the girlfriend part, as he constantly changes his mind about everything).It might be good for you if you like MCs like that but it's a no no for me.
Way too expensive. 20 coins for one chapter? thats like thrice-twice the amount for a normal story. And my fastpass doesnt even work for this novel.