What novels like this do you recommend?(like this and Super Godly Machine Army and the systems it provides for the host of soldiers)
The story is not bad overall. But the way the ML is acting towards FL who is 15 or 16 feels like he's a p3do. And whatmore, yes. we hate the villainess sister but to include r*pe towards her and her accompany who were underage as a revenge plot just to make the readers satisfy is just too much.
I might as well drop this. cuz of underage r*pe.
Its pretty good tbh
I am around ch 90
I've pretty much read the entire story now, and it was decent as far as the story and cultivation systems go. The main thing that I disliked, though, was the countless retconning of so many things, often in the very next chapter. There were also a lot of situations that the author expressly conveyed could absolutely not happen under any circumstances whatsoever, and then made them happen in the very next chapter. It seems to be a recurring theme for this author, and it is extremely irritating. In every capacity imaginable, the author threw consistency out the window and just wrote the story with events happening in illogical timeframes.
Ch321, ahahaha, what big scam
Yes the fuck the protagonist your going to die if you stay with him go make your self stronger
This book is fairly dumb. Not consistent and plot is bad. The MC is very unintelligent, family situation is ridiculous (who has a family like that and still goes to pay their debts and treat them with kindness? MC has no awareness or tack, she falls into traps easily and it's so unbearable to read.
I can write my self a review that's krazy then 5 star it is
looks promising.............................
I've read countless stories in this app but few kept me this hooked. It is amazing , the world building althought boring it makes everything make sense after reading ,and every paragraph made me imagine dreadful images, in my head that creeped me for a while. Nice work!
Good
Love the book so far, you have a great system in place, and you are developing the story well, can definatly see this being a series of novels and not a one and done. Keep up the great work, and we will continue to enjoy!!!!