The first thing I noticed is how I couldn't stop reading it, even from the first chapter it hooks your right away. Amazing work by our author here. Hope this book get's the recognition it needs.
At first it was for the FP but then I read all 4 chapters. Author why do you have to do Mr like this, climax both literally and figuratively. Don't tell me you are the 'Major Knight Bu...' (I can't remember how to spell that name).That's cold, I feel used, I just had my first one night stand. Zero penetration, witchcraft I tell you. you must take responsibility for me, more chapters will do the trick.
good book loved the concept and the character
I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own
Good its interesting ❤️ the ml is interesting and also mysterious while second ml is a bit savage and cool type and also a cute type ? love this novel ? please update fast
Later chapters are good. Grammer gets better.
Wow! What an amazing novel. Keep it up! I especially like your style, but your storytelling is also very nice! I am waiting for the next story!
I'm tired rn so I'm not gonna give the review now, but I like the story so I'll give 5 stars and will also give the review soon
First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.Pros:-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!-The title of the book is great and unique.-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.Cons:-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.
And suddenly the purple potion that after being mixed with the yellow potion turned into a dark black color.
human.
Fungus symbolizes purity, look how God put those fungus in our butt.