Can we talk about Cao Yang losing three hundred yuan and then calling his mom? I literally had to put the book down for a second. He's this kid who just earned a thousand yuan doing shady work, and instead of feeling proud, he's terrified. "If Li Yan found out, she'd skin him alive." But then he thinks about his mother—"When he left, she'd had to borrow around just to scrape together two hundred yuan for travel expenses." And he wants to send her three hundred. Three hundred yuan to a mother who borrowed money to send him away. That image just wrecked me. The author writes: "That's the way with gamblers: lose money, regret, then gamble again, regret again." But Cao Yang actually stops himself. He slaps himself in the face and walks away. That's not the action of a addict—that's the action of someone who loves his family more than the thrill. He calls his mom and LIES about having a factory job. Of course he lies. He doesn't want her to worry. And then his mom tells him Li Yan sent two thousand yuan home. TWO THOUSAND. While Cao Yang is down to four hundred yuan and considering working at a nightclub. The guilt on this kid's face must be unbearable. But here's what gets me—the romantic tension between Cao Yang and Li Yan. It's never stated, never confirmed, but it's in every glance, every defensive reaction, every time she calls him "brother" too quickly. "If you want to do that kind of thing, get a girlfriend later. Just not with me!" Why does she need to be so fast to shut it down? What is she afraid of? I'm convinced there's something underneath this that the author hasn't revealed yet, and I am NOT okay with waiting.
Good writing skills and storytelling. I never thought I would be this hooked but now I can't wait for the next chapter. I guess it has the potential to be on top someday.
I hope you enjoy and please write me your ideas about the story, I would like to know what improvements I should make, and I would be happy if someone who could create a cover image could write to me?
A slice of life story, kind of new to me but it's interesting. I like the idea of taking a test and passing it could change someone's future. Great work, keep it up.
First of, I'd like to start by saying bravo!, this is really fun to read, it's like the spy movies I used to read during my childhood, my only problem is when some scenes are rushed.
Truly think this will be a great novel love the writing refreshing haven’t see one like this in a while keep up the work man!!!!(remember me when this novel gets famous )
The writing style is good, I enjoyed as we went in deep in later chapters. There are some flaws . If you cam overcome that it will be very good novel to read
I loved it until now nice plot hope this goes well,???????????????I loved the storyline and Dear author I hope you won't ruin the plot by adding any extra trashy plots
To be honest, this is my first time reading other sci-fi books since I'm also writing one. Your idea itself is amazing although the marks you used confusing me a bit. There's so many "..." quotation marks and I already gave you a suggestion in the comment. Cheers!?
Please upload all the chapters hate the privilege chapters
The story is intriguing, I will definitely reading it more. Waiting for another chapters from your book. Room for improvement are still there but overall it has a nice story.
The first ten chapters are filled with thrill, excitement and mystery. I wanted to know who was the one helping her to survive! And I love how you portrayed the children's characters. Add more chapters, authornim!!