the writing is quite easy to understand, it's simple yet engaging. I can't wait to read more on Casper (he's my favorite so far) he's interesting and kinda relatable.
Its really good, starting hooked me fr and the vivid description are well written, good job ?
The story is engaging, and the characters are well-developed. It captures attention with every twist and makes the reader care about the journey.
Hello, first of all this book is going very well. As a historical fiction reader I have to say a few things. When you write a book, don't worry about what someone from this country will say. You can't write a book that will please everyone, no one can. Don't pay too much attention to the comments, after all it's your book.
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The Good: We have a fairly easy-to-understand setting and a MC with plant-based abilities is fairly unique. The world appears to be large and full of different groups than just humans and not the typical fantasy tropes. (Elves, dwarves, demons sorta thing)The Bad: The writing quality starts to slip. I can understand this because you start getting your flow, and you let it spill out onto the figurative paper in order to keep it going. Just remember to read the chapter after you finish it. A LOT of details are missing especially around the abilities and Thally. Early on Seth keeps saying Thally helped him, but we are not shown that help. Lastly, only once or twice are we given any background information about the world around the characters. A lot of details can be inferred from the text, but I had a hard time getting through some parts since I kept having to figure out certain things on my own.The Neutral: When you write, try to think about the perspective of the reader. If this is slowing you down or getting in the way, go ahead and finish the chapter first but then go back and read it again. A lot of the holes will be filled in automatically as the author, but readers cannot do the same without some details from the author. We don't need to know what their school uniforms look like since it is fine for each reader to imagine their own ideal uniform, but I don't know anything about Seth's appearance. You have something good going on here so keep it up. Your first story will be rough, but keep going and it will get better. You have a story you want to tell that you think others will enjoy so keep going and show us your story!
My Favorite Book Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely love the way Yato is written he seems so humanish ! His attitude and the way he interacts with others never come off as too arrogant or hateful. He feels like someone who was truly meant to exist in the Bleach universe—if that makes sense. His personality is a solid 1000/10, and I’ve never seen an OC written so well!Also, I really hope Rukia ends up as the love interest!The only thing I have a slight complaint about is the lack of details about the Yato's original world. Hey, Moongetsu, will we ever get a chapter exploring his past attachments? Did he have close friends, parents, or anyone who still remembers him? I’d love to see a chapter showing how his family and friends reacted after his death—it would add so much depth to his story.
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This is a really great and interesting story The emotions feel no like VR, I mean it feels soo real that akes you believe you're in that kind of like. Definitely recommend reading this. r
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