Your writing style was unique! It feels like I am reading a diary! The character's voice was echoing in my head as I read it! An effective and an outstanding work piece of art!
It is a well balanced story with a good setting and reasonable developments. The abilities available and character backgrounds are also satisfying. I wish this gets selected. What are the editors doing.
This is so good. I really loved the plot it was really interesting and how you start to build the characters and the world. I'm waiting for the future update its really good and worth to read.
Story pacing is way too slow.MC comes fully equiped with leadership qualities while he is a loner and hasn't been in a situation where he was required to lead.Too many side characters that its impossible to get a sense of connection with everyone, which would cause the story attention to be divided thus aggravating the pacing problem.