Genesiswriter
I was really enjoying this novel. I request the author are you abandoning or on hiatus. many off us diligent readers truly appreciate the work of art and hope to see it through the end
OMG the twists. why do I feel like Haelyn isn't even Cerius's daughter but he's just protecting her out of love. i can't wait for more??
An interesting synopsis it should be an entertaining story.
It gives this eerie vibe and brings reference from this world into reality, the writing was great, almost too great which is strange, the words you use,love it, and that name , you should probably do some cover art but I love it.
Amazing, one of the best things I've ever read.........................................................................................................
I think you need to go a little deeper in the world's lore. BUt the story have has a lot of potential!!!!!!!!Keep goin, author! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It’s a great story that knows how to carry readers along and make them picture the scenes in their mind. You should give it a try!
I am one of those mixed bag peeps on this while I love this is a sea based and structured type of story and not against that while being a system does make it neat. I hope to see how this story will pick up cause while that pic is enticing I am wondering what to expect. I plan to go into this more just need more time to figure out if I dig this or not. So far is interesting at least. :3
Nice!!! It was really good and I quite enjoyed it. The plot was interesting, has a nice flow to it. Waiting for more, so hope you upload soon
Netorare, NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTRGOOD GOOD A GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
An isekai genre that's actually good. It's a rare sight nowadays...The power fantasy is so well written. I love the way it's written so shortly, but so well detailed, I could imagine the fights so well. Extremely good, so damn recommended, but I guess the cover picture can be improved ?, just my opinion.
First-time reader of this author, and I was very pleasantly surprised by the witty dialog and descriptive eloquence. The saddest part is finishing what's out so quickly. Thank you very much for a great book!
