Hello, I have read this book up to chapter 15 and in my opinion, it is one of the most innovative books on the theme of sons of happiness and villains stealing that happiness that I have read. Really the author delights me with his unique perspective on this genre, reading this book I felt a breath of fresh air in the musty room of this genre of books. The plot engages with a theme of revenge and character development, on top of that you don't have to wait hundreds of chapters for Mc to change for the better. The author also brilliantly captured the theme of Mc's physical development, he doesn't spend some points to become a Greek god overnight, from his old obese self, but actually buckles down to achieve his dream figure. The fact he has help from a unique side character to achieve this, but it doesn't happen in one day only it may take him two weeks to a month to be in good shape. Beyond that, Mc becomes more and more clever and confident as the storyline progresses, which is very enjoyable. We also clearly see the traits of the other characters, making them not seem one-dimensional. The romance is also well-written, but it's not the sweet one from books about the heroic Mc, but the one from books about villains, i.e. more manipulative and toxic, and bordering on taboo. The skills possessed by Mc are interesting, but Mc is not unique because others also possess powerful deceptions and Mc will actually have to make an effort in fighting them and strain his head. In addition, the author updates if I remember correctly daily which is a huge plus. I also haven't noticed any major problems with writing style or grammar, typos, repetitions, etc. I sincerely recommend it to all lovers of this genre and beyond.
Good story line man. Not a unique style written but it suits well..
Shameless author review. Every once in a while I'll leave a comment on how novel is progressing. Feel free to comment under the post if you have any questions about the Novel.....Currently only 10 chapters in and I must say, everything is falling into place quite smoothly. I made the first 10 chapters more action based to easily do a basic info dump about the world and the power system works so readers won't be confused. Other than that, there isn't much to say, it is only 10 chapters so far and I do not plan on dropping the novel. I recommend this novel for those who want a unique and fresh piece so I'll appreciate any support given and hope this is a fun enough read.
Things I like about this book1. MCs personality2. World background3. Real villain MC not just in name4. Netori scenesThings I don't like1. R18 scenes too long2. So little interaction scenes btw main cast3. Less storyline focus4. Sometimes characters are invisible5. Little bit of netorase during the time girls are being conquered or before conquering6. Too much skips in scenes and important information that we have to read btw the lines or should I say btw chapters
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This story is like a mystery box of romance, tragedy, and seriously dark moments. Our main character starts out as a total weakling, but don’t worry—there’s some action that turns things around. And, oh boy, the main love interest? A cold-blooded yandere with the villain attitude cranked up to the max. ?Every chapter has me like:- "Wait, did they just betray each other?!"- "Did he just fight 10 guys to save her?!"- "Oh no, someone’s about to cry… again."If you’re into historical vibes with a touch of craziness, characters who can't seem to have a normal love life, and a main character going from weak to strong, this is the one. Just prepare yourself for drama, a wild romance, and some tragic feels!
nice and interesting one I'll be reviewing it
how is it possible to review a novel with 0 chapter?
Amazing novel. Waiting for more chapters.
THIS MC IS THE STRONGEST CHARACTER I HAVE EVER SEEN LOL
Hello, author's alt account.... as of now, we already entered the second arc.. I would like to know your comments on my current work by making a review .. healthy criticisms will be appreciated... thanks
I must say that this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time .I do hope you continue writing, you really have a talented awesome work bud