mc is stupid, the chapters are short and mc uses jeez way often then he uses his brain I am dropping this novel 5 year old write better stories than you
where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes
Alright, I must say that this book is a piece of art! I don't know why it doesn't have a review yet but here is your 5-star, I can say that this book has great potential. The idea about the slimes in the tutorial ground is interesting, I find it enjoyable to read when the MC fought them. I'm wondering when can I meet them again so as to see how will the MC deal with those slimes especially when they had gotten much stronger after they respawned.Speaking of the MC's abilities, it also caught my interest really well. I'm itching to know how will he use these abilities to fight his enemies. But as of now, the MC seemed like he is yet to try it out as he can only use the world's mana. I will watch the MC how will he learn to use those abilities and achieve strength far greater than anyone else. Thank you author for this wonderful story. I hope you have good luck and have peace of mind to maintain writing such a good story.
I'm very much looking forward to this being picked, it's great so far, primitive novels like this are rare, other than this one I can only think of Chronicles of Primordial Wars.
