Can we just take a moment to appreciate how good Xu Yao's internal monologue is? Because this woman has NOTES. 'My son, the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility! If you ever become rich and powerful, don't forget your mom. From now on, I'll be counting on you.' — Said with a straight face, while lying in bed under a kerosene lamp, patting her five-year-old's hand. This is peak comedic timing. And then later, when she's talking to the police station auntie: 'Sorry, I wasted some time this morning moving the household registration. I missed the town bus and delayed you all from getting off work, didn't I?' With dried sweet potatoes in her pocket like some kind of political offering. The performance is Oscar-worthy. But the dialogue isn't just funny—it's character-revealing. Look at how Xu Yao speaks to her father when he comes out of the police station. She doesn't yell. She doesn't cry. She just... opens the household register and lets him READ it. The silence between them says everything. Xu Weidong's response is just two words: 'You mean it?!' That's it. That's all he has. After everything—the favoritism, the betrayal, the way he treated his own daughter—his entire emotional vocabulary collapses to disbelief. And Liu Mei? She's the perfect foil. 'Quick, go! Talk to him nicely, say some soft words.' Soft words? Absolutely impossible. The contrast between Liu Mei's submissive nature and Xu Yao's razor-sharpness is what makes their dialogue sing.
a little lengthy on the chapters. good story line waiting to read more....
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Good plot and world background , unique writing style , i'm waiting for more chapters keep it up
overall kinda average kind of novel in this app basically a more light hearted version of shadow slave with fantasy world building elements with an annoying horny undertone that happens for 50% of the novel from chapter 5 onwards other than that over all average nothing majorly good or bad
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Interesting book so far, nice background building. The striking balance between dialogues and description is what set this story apart from any other. Good job
Greetings! I really liked the premise of the starting chapters and is hopeful for the continuation of such quality works in the future! Good Job Author!
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From the very first pages, the story draws you in, making you eager to explore more of this world. The narration is well-crafted, and the plot raises many intriguing questions. The mystery surrounding his true identity piques my curiosity after all, if even a celestial being sees him as special, who knows what he might truly be? All in all, a promising and skillfully constructed work.
The story begins in a captivating way, drawing the reader in with an intriguing atmosphere full of promise. From the very first pages, it's impossible not to feel drawn to the protagonist's potential for growth, as their journey unfolds with challenges and discoveries. The narrative builds a great sense of anticipation around their development, suggesting that every choice and obstacle will be crucial in shaping their destiny. With such a promising start, curiosity only grows, leaving the reader eager to follow every step of this exciting journey.
This novel is one of the best. And this guy is providing us with free chapters. Thank you very much. Just post last two chapters of volume 13.