One of toikas worst novel. I mean, all of his novels are generic but this is jut to bad.
Thats no tf NTR all my traumatic memories reading sh*t like that BIG RED FLAG
Ugh ai just went from reading Shadow Slave and Primordial record to this. Didnt realize the difference in narration, grammar, characters, vocabulary, etc. was THIS bif. ugh I hate settling but whatever.
Don't know if it's to your taste it's Monster Paradise
I am currently coming out of the average Chinese novels. I am looking for novels that are a little more explicit so to speak, but this novel is intolerable for my taste. I'm not saying that the perverted part of the novel should be removed, but that these things should be placed in specific situations and not show such a level of degeneracy at all times.
i need someone to clarify this for me is Harriet Terrence a man or a woman?
It seems good but the style of story telling is a bit bad and the starting is a bit confusing and rushed
This novel took me through the most intense emotional experiences. There is no big bad wolf here. Every one is just a victim of circumstances. If i was them i would have reacted the same way despite my beliefs. Kudos to the author
Story seems fine, but the problem I have with it is fut@, I know people like the author and his audience are into those, I'm absolutely straight and felt uncomfortable with it. But still, story is fine
The fanfiction has a promising and interesting idea that has the potential to become a great story. Unfortunately, the reading experience is hindered by the poor writing style and bad grammar. There are many spelling and grammar errors that can cause difficulties for readers, and the plot is confusing due to unnecessarily complex sentences and unclear phrasing. We would recommend the author to take more time to express their ideas more clearly and precisely, and to conduct a thorough revision to improve the readability and enjoyment of the story. Despite the weaknesses of the writing style, the story is promising and has the potential to become a masterpiece if carefully revised.
novels like this are simply money-losing goods
Writing quality: excellent. There are few mistakes, and I think a lot of those can be chalked up to Webnovel’s slipshod backend. Update stability: unstable. The author is writing two novels concurrently, both of which I follow, and both of which are suffering on this point. I think they were just too impatient and didn’t build up any stockpile at all, so they’re releasing chapters as they’re written. Story development: slow. I normally don’t review novels this early (as of the time I’m writing this, there are only 23 chapters available), but I really like the premise. Both of the author’s novels are really good, and - a rarity on Webnovel, where authors mostly copy and paste from each other in a neverending train of trend-following - best of all, they’re original. That said, the story is somewhat aimless right now and proceeding as if it’s in a three-way race with a glacier and a snail in a salt maze. In other words, it’s slow. However, I do expect it’ll pick up Soon(tm). Character design: inspired. While they aren’t perfect, or even great, by any means, the characters are at least unique. The author does an excellent job of making the main character feel weak and underpowered, forced to get by on his wits alone when thrown into a situation where virtually anyone he meets could accidentally kill him by frowning in his general direction. That alone is a breath of fresh air in a stale market that’s oversaturated by flavor-of-the-month overpowered Mary Sue MCs. In fact, most MCs on Webnovel are closer to the people Mary Sue wants to be when she grows up. World background: unexplored. The author hasn’t been focusing on any kind of worldbuilding so far outside of introducing two antagonistic factions. Other than that, and some very basic cultivation information (essentially just the name of the cultivation realms themselves), we know nothing about the world at large as of yet. Overall: I really enjoy what I’ve seen so far and hope that the author can pick up the pace, both in terms of story development and release rate. Those are the only two areas that it’s currently lacking in, but as far as story is concerned, you have to understand that the author has only written 23 chapters so far.