More than I expected. Pretty good imo. Give it a chance ?
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the author does not even look at the comments of the chapters. people criticize him too much, but the author does not even respond, the novel is literally mc without a brain.
It’s a decent novel but it uses overly complicated terminology that turns a good novel into one that’s about as interesting as casually reading a dictionary.
I know its just been a chapter but the cover design is explicable as well as the title and the story design.I'm just waiting patiently for the real story.But for the beginning and effort, I have to rate it 5 stars, because it is not easy to write a nice novel.Good luck!
the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao...............................................................
it's a great book with an interesting premise, but I do think that it could sorely use an editor. it's never anything huge that I can't figure out, but theres definitely typos including the MC being called Seth not Elias quite a few times
It’s not bad but I wouldn’t say it was good either,im on chapter 70 and one thing that sucks is that the author keeps wasting chapters on the family saying the same thing, they all act cringy/overboard when they never met the kid regardless if it’s family. Another thing is that the author must like writing beta male characters including the mc because every male character basically jusy gets dominated by their counter part with no struggle. The mom is literally trying to restrict the mcs potential without even caring and using the excuse of his safety, she doesnt even ask the opinion of the dad or trust him with the kid. The dad just gets completely dominated, whatever his mom says he does and literally he never questions it? She punishes them for having fun while training, regardless if she’s his mother or not, shes way overboard and unrealistic?Story has potential but side characters emotions feel unnatural, mc has no growth so far. I’m gonna keep reading and hope it gets better though?
Very original and picturesque story, I love it.I would say that the main thing in this story will be the development of both characters and general and the originality of having two reincarnates
Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced.The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters.Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.
If anybody has read "record of unusual creatures" then the background story of the xyrin empire is closely related to the xiling celestials before they attained godhood. which is interesting cause this makes it look like it is a prequel to what happened before record of unusual creatures. Noice.
STOP BRINGING NEW NOVELS AND FINISH THE ONES THAT HAVE BEEN ON HIATUS! STOP BRINGING NEW NOVELS AND FINISH THE ONES THAT HAVE BEEN ON HIATUS! STOP BRINGING NEW NOVELS AND FINISH THE ONES THAT HAVE BEEN ON HIATUS! STOP BRINGING NEW NOVELS AND FINISH THE ONES THAT HAVE BEEN ON HIATUS!