Hey there ? author here! So, I’ll be leaving this review for those curious about giving it a try after checking the synopsis. Also, if you're enjoying the novel, don’t forget to leave a review.This is my first attempt at a kingdom-building story. There might be some sci-fi elements in the future, but for now, expect a foundation and OP mc. The prologue was originally a different setup, but I changed it. Feel free to skip it and dive straight into the main story. Enjoy the read ? and let me know if you have any questions!
First two chapters are really nice I think I am going to love this novel❣️?
first of all I'd love to say how seemingly slow the NPCs and Monsters are like how come they're so foolish I mean admittedly they are a bunch of bots essentially but like still also literally the whole world lack character it's practically a one man show that's kinda slow to read it's boring honestly doesn't even utilize the game and system qualities that would have at least made it bearable but nah leveling is just I kill one and dozens of monsters and all other foolish things
you gotta continue this fic it's one of the best ones about Hip Hop on here and there so many ways you can take it like Pac starting a Record label with talents in different genres and not just a rap label, the movie business beef with the gov and Diddy I can't wait to see what you do
A wonderful book by an amateur writer. I cannot wait to read the next books by the author. I love her. Love you Kira.❤️❤️
Interesting story from the beginning. I loved the four coffins?????! How did you even think of that??!
I just here for the free FP given for review
Great start! Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
This is my first system story and In all honesty, I love every bit of the chapters I’ve read so far. Really gonna come back to it. Well done author? you just got 10 points from me
Amazing- A true miracle of God- A good misunderstanding novelI stand in awe as I witness this magnum opus bless me with its existence, my soul screaming in ecstasy-Nah, I'll stop now XDSeriously though, this shit SLAPS so hard! It's very good, the misunderstandings feel natural and it makes sense that, logically, the characters would come to those conclusions with the knowledge they have.TD⁏DR: Very good ?
ML forces/imposes himself onto FML. When they’re married, he breaks his promise of never hurting her and only being good to her, then he treats another woman well. When both women were in danger during an avalanche on a snow mountain, he saves the other. Afterwards, he forces FML to forgive him by threatening his own life. His pitiful state is his fault and his behavior is cheap. Disgusting. Thankful I didn’t pay money to get to those parts. Next!
UNIQUE!!The writer's creative and imaginative skills are at par. Indulging fantasy and sci-fi is an unique concept. But the chapters could be made longer and there were few grammatical errors, which weren't that problematic.Overall, it's an interesting plot.Keep going!!!