writing quality: If not for a few strange sentences here and there that don't really make sense as they are or have a logical issue, i would give this 6 stars. that's not possible, but i still want to express how much i like the way it's written. it feels just as immersive as the many books on my shelf. it also really fits the overall mood and world.
story development: i haven't reached very far, but it heavily reminds me of plenty of royal romance face slapping webtoons, only that there's no romance, but honestly, i don't even miss it! reading it is simply satisfying.
character design: i can't complain much. The characters are unique, and there isn't an overload of useless characters, meaning each introduced character has a clear role and is easily distinguished. the reason i only gave 4 stars here is that they aren't described much, which makes it a bit hard to be sure what they're supposed to look like.
updating stability: I have no clue as i haven't caught up yet. Enjoy the free 5 stars, author!
world background: i love the vibes, and i love the setting. it's not anything no one else has thought of before, but there's a healthy amount of "unusual" combinations, which, in turn, make it feel fresh and lift it from the masses.
personal notes: If you want to see the protagonist fight and struggle, this novel isn't for you. the hardships already happened, so he's now on a face slapping spree, easily making all the villains miserable and coughing up blood (not quite so dramatic in the novel, that's just me). but if you like that, go for this novel!
when is the next book coming out
I need to see the rest of this book please you can't leave me hanging like this I need to see more
i cant believe i enjoyed reading this story...i love it
Great story!
saya mahu bahasa Melayu
Good book. Love it
Not typically a fan of Mafia stories but I really enjoyed this one. I think you did a good job with the characters and plot. I think the redemption arc was one of the best I have read on here. Highly recommended reading!
The best author and the only reason I haven't deleted the GoodNovel app. I am really enjoying your work or rather your book.
The storyline is so good
I'm sure Marriane is in for it. She sure would make a nice lead
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