hi author. when will you finish this book?
am so inlove with this love story
Was hoping Flint would be getting a book as well...
It was hard to get thru. Little childish and made girl look like she has loose morals/desperate to make out with every guy and too upfront....Andre seems very nice and patient but also confused...loving someone who constantly rejected him... most likely written by a teenager. But still good job!
The character in this book is getting hotter each chapter :)
Yessssssss
this some crazy taboo (not rating yet juss commenting on intro)
Typically, I, along with most reasonable individuals, tend to steer clear of harem stories involving a ten-inch pole. However, after reading about ten chapters of this particular novel, I found myself completely captivated. I'd like to clarify that if you're seeking an Overlord-level world-building experience, this might not meet your expectations. Nevertheless, I genuinely enjoyed the story. It's a bit of a wish-fulfillment tale, but it executes it in a refreshing, non-generic way. The characters are well-developed and entertaining. I would definitely recommend it to others.
U still followin like d*mn I thought you would leave by 400 500
Anyway did it became more gay than it already was...
This is an engaging narrative featuring an MC who grapples with personal demons from his previous life, all while striving to better himself and uplift his elven companions. The romantic development between them is handled skillfully, as he doesn't rush into declarations of love right away, but rather focuses on gradually building a genuine connection.
So far, the story provided a glimpse into the MC's life, but I'm disengaging due to the introduction of the harem. The MC attempts to justify his harem with the reasoning that he's in a different world and, as a man, has natural desires. He claims his wife encourages him to be the dominant alpha, hence the harem. However, Chapter 181 introduces a plot point where Lefi, the Supreme dragon, discusses "alpha males," which seems incongruous given her solitary lifestyle and lack of understanding in romantic matters.
The question arises: Why would Lefi, who has lived alone for so long, suddenly bring up such concepts? Where is her mate, and why did she choose Yuki, who wasn't particularly strong? Additionally, despite her age, she doesn't have any children, which raises further doubts.
Yuki himself is unsure of what he truly wants. He admits to having favorable thoughts about harems but then expresses his love for Lefi and claims he doesn't want more wives, aside from her. This inconsistency leaves readers confused.
The transition from Yuki, the caring Papa figure, to a seemingly conflicted character who allows Illuna to drink his blood, creating a potential marriage bond according to the world's norms, is confusing. He struggles to reject the girls' proposals, further muddling his intentions.
What I find problematic is the disconnect between the MC's stated desires and actions. He claims to love Lefi while contemplating a harem, and he treats the girls like daughters while being unable to firmly refuse marriage proposals. It would be more satisfying if the character's decisions were consistent with his words.
In summary, while I have no issue with the concept of a harem, the inconsistent behavior of the MC detracts from the story. It would be better if the character's motivations and actions aligned with his declarations.
As an avid reader, "Becoming a Monk in Tokyo" left me captivated by its unique blend of culture shock and spiritual exploration. The protagonist's journey from mundane life to the serene temples of Japan was both intriguing and thought-provoking. The vivid descriptions of Tokyo's contrasts, combined with the protagonist's inner turmoil, made for a compelling narrative. I found myself deeply invested in his transformation, rooting for him to find balance between tradition and modernity. A must-read for anyone seeking a profound tale of self-discovery set against the vibrant backdrop of the city.