The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed. I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself)" On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about.That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!"Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..??I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
Not a real review, Just wanted to ask if there will be NTR or Yuri before I start reading
I can't read this. I don't even know how to say this but it felt very dull to read almost like a computer type this up or something. as it just felt like when reading this the story's way of describing things with like no life to the description. then there was things that the main character would talk about that make no sense.
Not a review, just my comment about a couple of things.Now, as of now, what's bothering me is the lack of logic behind the decisions the MC takes. For example, he can get a legendary supporter for 5000 points, and yet decides to spend a whopping 150k on a useless training ground whereas he could have gotten 30 of such insanely OP supporters for the same amount. Then he proceeded to spend another 90k on useless troops when he could have bought 18 more of the OP soldiers.I mean, he could practically dominate the world in a matter of weeks (or live comfortably without conquest if he wished) but he makes useless decisions.Another example, and this one is just purely stupid, is the fact that he summoned 100 tones of gold to fill his treasury. Firstly, good luck managing the hyperinflation that would ruin the empire if it was a little realistic, and second, he could have summoned an army of competent officials (not costing 5000 each obviously).IdK, we will see for the rest.
love it. Good job author. book is soo interesting. I rarely go beyond a few chapters with most novels but this one I can't wait for chapter releases.
I wasn't expecting much... but now I need more
An interesting premise and main character unlike from other stories so far don't drop this author looking to see more. Although I would like for it to have more interactions between the main character and the heroine.
It’s as gritty as I expected and I’m here for all that, wish I could chain the author to his keyboard for faster updates
This is a great beginning of a book. In the very first chapter, you get to know the stakes and what to expect in the rest of the book. I like that kind of goal setting and Ethan wastes no time trying to get back up to the top
I just love how the story is turning into... i absolutely love this novel. I'm waiting to read more of it. It's such a great story ?????
"Okay now number 4, when Germany succeeded in invading the human world, who succesed to bring down Germany."
"Ifritz, I already told you desu, you called my name in a wrong spell, the right is Kaenjieeeeee! Desu".