interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
pretty good yee. why doesnt the mc eat humans and/or monsters? she could save money and get exclusive cuisine.
Can you change the name of the girl? like more western
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To all new readers. Start from chapter 252 That's where the rewritten version starts. The chapters bellow 252 have horrible quality. <3
The novel is pretty good so far, amazing! It has a lot of action and suspense that makes the readers feel excited and nervous, even me. You describe the scenes vividly and creates a lot of tension and drama. The fights are well-written and show the different abilities and strategies of the characters.However:The novel has some grammatical and spelling errors that can distract the readers and affect the flow of the story. You should proofread and edit the chapters before publishing them or use a tool like Grammarly to check for mistakes if you want to...The novel has some inconsistencies and plot holes that can confuse the readers and create logical errors. For example, in chapter 2, Kage says he doesn’t know what level three is, but in chapter 3, he says he knows it’s a rumor. In chapter 4, Kage says he doesn’t know how to use his OGI, but in chapter 5, he uses it without any explanation. In chapter 6, Kage says he doesn’t know who Unknown is, but in chapter 7, he calls him his best friend. You should keep track of the details and events of the story and make sure they are consistent and coherent. (I'm not a pro or anything, just some advice.)But Overall, still good! The novel is an enjoyable and entertaining read that has a lot of strengths and possibilities. You have a creative imagination and a good sense of humor. The novel can appeal to fans of sci-fi and fantasy genres who like action-packed.
Bhai is novel ke bare mein novel updates par kai negative reviews hai.Unse main yhi kahunga pehle novel ke 30 chapter pado phir bolna...Baki mere ko to ye novel bahut hi jyada pasand aya hai
You know, if he want to, he can eat us in one bite.
"No, I didn't kill him, he killed himself and made him look like I killed him."
"Then, Mat, what the smart human will do?" asked Kenji.
Whether it's physical or whatever, and of course they will hire professional people who are ready to laugh crazy no matter how funny and cringe the joke is, they will laugh madly and take out their kecak dance moves.
This slave ... He just a slave, even he get abuse, i hate slave like him but, if i think much more, he just a victim. What he have done? Why do God put him in this creazy place? It's sound funny, he just good person and get abuse.