i got an idea and i wanted to share It with you, when we get more ahead with the story, by that i mean many hundreds if the story Is short, or thousands if the story Is long, would you add the universe to the story? for example various races (ex. elfs, dragons,ecc.) or even unique races that don't exist already and each has their own Power system, talents, maybe higher and lower races that have vast difference in innate strenght, (like the difference between a dragon and a wyvern for example), maybe even galaxies, gods that reign those galaxies and dimensions ( for example First to 4th dimension), humans reside in the First, second dimension other races live, and the same with the 3rd and 4th, in each dimension time flows differently, and the Door trails are bringing people in those other dimensions, i know It sounds like a Grand but stupid idea, but i believe if you Plan everything carefully, the story would become many times Better than It already Is. Hope this idea of mine can help you.?ps. i Just realised i wrote 1k words, Sorry about that lol
Intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading
this is an amazing book with well planned events and lovable characters. waiting for more chapters
Very goodI mean we all have that one friend that can't handle their alcohol??Only problem is spelling errors here and there but overall good
[More like you stole them…] Ddraig muttered
Kenji ....
Today our school has meeting, so the time of study is just few hours.
Class: None
"Issei, is everything okay? You seem kinda out of it today..." The small Vampire asked as he looked to his 'big brother'.
The girl nodded, a frown etched on her face, "I want to. Ireallywant. After everything, I'm glad you feel afraid, that you're just as weak as the humans you hate so much. But…I keep coming back to what someone told me, I can't stop thinking that if I'd just done what he'd told me, maybe none of this would've happened. Maybe if I'd try to understand Stark, Pietro and I wouldn't have helped you. Maybe he'd be alive. Maybe all of these people would be alive."
As usual, today Vladimir was working with Recoil a young girl of his age. She hated being touched, even a tap on the shoulder and she would recoil. Thus, she had gained her nick-name. Recoil and Vladimir worked together well and so they stayed a team working quietly side by side each day.
You'll never know if you don't go