The quality of the translation decreases with every chapter. Specificaly after ther 40th chapter it just feels like MTL.
Bad world buildingBoring lack competitivenessPlot doesn't make senseMath problemLack details
can someone tell me the mlt or raw of this novel ...............................................................................................
Evil mc I hope the author keep like this I’ enjoying reading this novel if u r looking for evil mc that slaughter and do anything to level up this u go btw I hope the author doesn’t introduce poison to the novel or harem or romance m
Hello all, Please forgive my reviewing my own novel. But I only need 1 more to get to 10. And I think it’s a good idea to think objectively about what I’ve written.I like to think that the first person - past perspective narrative lends itself well to this kind of story. Yes, we ultimately know where Desmond will end up, but it’s not about the “what” happens, but about the “how” it happens. We get to see Desmond struggle through new worlds, meet new people, and grow and change into a person he never would have expected to become. If you like stories where the MC works hard and earns his powers, while facing off against curruption from within, gods, angels, demons and wizards. This is the book for you! I hope you’ll give it a chance!
This story started out well enough with good potential but slowly went downhill. Especially the later chapters around 170 or so, it feels like the author has given up and just writing for the sake of it. Many wrong choices were made and I observed that the author will ignore fans and viewers opinion. I feel that the main reason behind the downfall of this story is that the author wants to focus and succeed the work he's earning money from. That's not a bad thing. Sure this is a free fanfic. But you had loyal readers for this story as well. And it feels disappointing that a good author will ignore that and then continue experimenting on what he thinks is an inferior story. I don't mean to be so harsh in this review but I was one of the many fans who had high hopes for this story. Unless this gets an edit, this is it. I thank you for your updates and wish you all the luck!
this is a good start and it is very promising, especially when the mc is qlready so weak and surroumded by a toxic environmentike this .he needs to prove himself very fast so that he would be the king .of course , he has so mich trauma but i can't to see the dark part about this .it is a good start author , keep up the good work
37 five star reviews. Lol. Pretty easy to tell the author deletes reviews. Man, I always come to novels to check out the 2-3 star reviews because they’re usually the most honest about what a novel is usually like rather than the 5 star bot spam “this novel is great! XD “ crap. What a shame that I won’t read this novel at all because the author has 200+ chapters but only 36 reviews that are all 5 stars lmao.
Read 20 chapters and I gotta say this is pretty good as the mc won't become instantly powerful instead he has to slowly build it up. Also, there's an actually good dad in this novel
I don't usually write a review when the story is still in the beginning, but it made me want to follow. There are certain grammatical errors but nothing that gets in the way of reading and the plot is very well done, I want to read more so keep up the good work!
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I recommend this story for people who typically like god like mc . Mc got reincarnated in another world with an cheat like system and made his top without any difficulty .