Some problems in here1. Grammar ( the subject like he, she, him, her)2. Time Skip ( so fast, but the mc power progress not )3. Change POV too much4. Good foreshadow ( or stupid cliffhanger?)The one that speak on opening ceremony, who knows so suddenly MC got Angry and didnt show up on next few chapter5. Stupid Power rankMC can smash new A Rank but cant beat Queen Spider? the one that he fought at 7 years old, and how old he is when she saved Lily? The way he wasting his time without power up with the so called future Right Hand of Demon King and his Memories, well yeah AMAZINGWell author admit too that he want irritate us with his MC and congrats you got it.
To those who have already read my novel before the contract was signed, I appreciate your intentions, but please refrain from posting reviews suggesting that my work has been plagiarized, without first verifying with me.I would like to clarify that the current views and reviews on my novel's website are from its initial release on Webnovel in March 2023. Since then, my work has been honored with a formal contract. In response to this new milestone, I am dedicated to improving and resolving any readability issues that were previously in the novel, aiming to enhance its overall quality.
"Aright, now continue licking your sister's little sister until I tell you to stop, kay?" -chapter 38-Not a fan of Yuri-s*x even though the mc is present. So this novel is a big no to me.
I am surprised with your talent and writing skill I don't usually read these types of books but by taking a chance I must commend the author for writing this book and also I rate all 5 star........ To the best I could tell by the chapters that you are one out of a million best author in the world I must say you deserve all the best in the future and that wish are coming from myself Vanessa dowlatram keep it up???????????????????????
A review at 20 chapters.I posted a couple of comments in the first chapters about what the MC was even there for, figuring that he would just be a slave of the system. I'm really not a fan of that type of trope, so I was dreading reading another story where the MC is led around by the nose.Turns out I was half right, in that the MC isn't led around by the system, but by the situation and the customers he's helping. Which could be seen as a distinction without a difference. But it turns out it's not important at all.You see, the MC isn't really the MC. He's a side character, and that's fine. The system isn't the MC either, as it just facilitates what the MC needs to do. No, the real main character isn't a character at all, but the story itself. Or rather, the stories contained within the story.So far, in 20 chapters, there has been one completed story, and most of a second. The first was... heart wrenching. Good in its way, but the characters involved are really something else. There's anger, there's sadness, there's actual emotion that's pretty rare to find in these parts.But the second story, well, it's just... beautiful. A story of a noble heart and unwavering spirit that is truly touching.And where are the MC and the system in all this? They're just facilitating the stories being told. And that's just fine.
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Boring wish fulfilment novel. Cant really get into it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I'm sorry, going by the comments the story may be good, but the translation is so bad I could not get past the ninth paragraph of the first chapter.
One thing I can say about this novel is that it is way too addicting to put down and this is after reading through all of the available chapters. I spent days non stop reading which is very rare for me. The first thing that sets this apart from the typical isekai is the plot and character development. It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally compelling complex plot with many things happening in the background. Sensei went from someone I disliked with a vengeance to a pretty likeable character and the change was completely natural and not forced. Another thing is how characters aside form the mc work, they change the plot, move the plot, have genuine personalities outside of the mc. I also love how the mc's actions have consequences and also aren't 100% moral like the typical shounen protagonist. Some decisions she makes will have you questioning right from wrong. The mc also comes across as cold and calculating from the start and I didn't like that at first, but i understand it comes from the pressure of trying to survive and overtime I like how she has started to care. The diction /wording of chapters is very unique and smooth. Not only is the author's vocabulary extensive and intriguing, its never boring and you can feel the thought process that goes into picking each word. If I was to describe the authors mastery and control over their diction, it would be using a different weapon each time when hunting a target and never missing the bullseye. The words really craft the feel of the scene and the characters take off and don't stop going. I wish there was more to read but I have to settle for daily updates.
[This review adheres to the five different rating categories Webnovel provides. In order, Writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. I will separate these into different paragraphs for your convenience.]I rate the writing quality four stars. There isn't an egregious amount of spelling mistakes throughout the currently released chapters, and the flow of reading is pretty good with the exception of the first chapter. Hopefully, you can call me a doofus for saying that once my fellow author polishes it to represent his peak performance.Stability of updates is five stars. With an initial five chapters to start everyone off, I'm sure we can expect more at a steady pace going forward.Story Development is five stars. The foundation of the story was laid out both in the synopsis and the initial chapters. We can clearly see the suffering the protagonist must endure, making me want to root for him and hope that he'll come out of this terrible ordeal.Character design is three stars. No one in the story has a memorable appearance thus far in my mind, though they are quite animated despite that. They aren't cardboard cutouts wearing clothes, which is good, but they could certainly use some more descriptors.World Background is five stars. While laying down the foundation of the story, we learn a great deal of the world's history. It's a point of interest in the synopsis, and a cause of conflict in the story.The overall rating I give this novel is 4.4 stars. It's pretty good!
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Es bastante buena la verdad pero no deberías volverlo tan op de golpe sino que sea más lento para que la historia se desarrolle y tenga rivales así sería muy buena la historia además métele ecchi no joda