Good story overall. Well written and interesting. However, I can’t get over the academy sending two brand new students to a place they didn’t even check on and then didn’t even consider saving them from when they found out it had an emergency. Then let them sit for a day before others had to take them back. Then they had to explain themselves to everyone multiple times!!! It was very frustrating to read and a glaring logic oversight by the author. Also, others were almost killed and everyone laughs it off. Just stupid.
proper review :3 for updating stability and 3 for writing of course story starts with hruday main character who has asthma and dislexia which he later discovered he goes to his school reopening only to find out that his life was going to change drastically from that single decision he is just above average smart introverted guy filled dark thoughts and tierd of loop (ahh why does it feel like I am describing myself except the above average part) this story contains base building element which people don't put lot of emphasis on just watch how a teen tries to manage a entire base filled with adults and it has lot of gore later on and shows mentel and emotional conditions of survivors later on as years pass don't worry it won't be boring long let me give you a spoiler no a hint : real crow, super special I Really don't know how to review without getting excited and spoil so that's it give me some review guys and show some mercy
I didn't read this book yet, but the name reminds me of that book about a guy that reincarnated as a stick in a game world .--. so I will read this too :3
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Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it.Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.
Is this the same fanfic that is in wattpad?It is great to my opinion................................................................................................................................
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Keep up the good work, don't change your style of writing!But if possible try to slow down the s scene since there are some children on webnovel who might wish to read it as well. My brother likes it too, keep it up! #Vampires ❤
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