hey man did you drop this novel or what? your break has gone pretty long for an average break, quickly come and finish your awesome work.
Honestly, from the sypnosis, I can tell there is nothing new in the storyline (apart from the usual 10000 return b******t) but still expectant of the book and what it holds in store for us
keep it up nice work........................................................................................................................................................................................................
This us about a man who became a father before he was thrown into the river... thanks to that he became an immortal. With the cultivation of the heavenly emporer's power he embarks on a journey to find his dear wife at the same time take revenge on people who offended him earlier... Very thrilling time to read.... except the part where he kills a load of people
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, he gains powers without explaination or reason.This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
This is my review after reading 60 chapters of this jovel.The writing quality of this novel is good with little to no grammatical errors. I can barely find anything that is hard to understand.The story development of the novel as far as I have read is doing great. The synopsis of the novel might seem cliche and readers might think that the story might also be cliche. However, i haven't found anything cliche in this novel at all. The plot seems to go in the predictable direction but there is always twist and turn in the plot. The story development is going in such a way that it will make readers curious about the things that will happen next.As far as the character development goes there is no huge character development of the character. There are subtle character development for the mc where he comes to understand about people characters. However, this novel is only at its early phase. So I am expecting to see some character development as the novel continues.Finally about the world background. The world where the story is taking place is simliar to earth until the S arrives.
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The premise of this book has some excellent potential already with the mixing of different genres.Although, as someone who doesn't know much outside of the apocalyptic genre I could use a little more background information on the different Realms and the sects. Just a small description for someone who is getting into this genre for the first time.Nonetheless the author still managed to get me hooked! I would highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for something new and exciting to read!Well done author!
THIS IS SOOO D*MN GOOOD!!! You will LOVE IT!! Exciting, great characters, terrific story, refreshing, with so moving love moments... She’s a badass assassin, he’s the King. She’s ice,he’s warming fire. Author,we’re waiting. I totally recommend this novel!!!! SOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOD!!!
Hi...An Amazing book....Totally love it; The characters, The background and many more. I also like the sword skills of the characters.Still reading. But soon I'll finish it. It's really interesting.
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