Okay so the plot in these chapters is actually really tight and I need to talk about the Ms. Zhang twist because it is PERFECTION. Let me walk through this. Zhong Suian wants a villa. She has like 1000 yuan. Her brother sends her 400. She's stuck. Then Sun Xu shows up with clients — a couple — and immediately starts groveling to the man while completely ignoring the woman. Classic move. Or so we think. Then Zhong Suian does something brilliant. She doesn't try to steal the deal from under Sun Xu's nose. She goes to the WOMAN. She offers her a seat, some water, actual respect. And the woman opens up immediately because of course she does — she's been ignored the entire time. The woman reveals she actually prefers a different property, an 8000-yuan house in Emerald Lake Court. She's already decided to buy there. She just can't stand Sun Xu's attitude. So she asks Zhong Suian to handle the paperwork and the commission is hers. This is the first layer of the twist — Zhong Suian gains a legitimate sale through competence and basic human decency. But then the SECOND twist hits and I literally gasped. Sun Xu is celebrating, thinking he closed the deal, when Ms. Zhang reveals that SHE is the one paying. Mr. Wang — the man he's been fawning over — is her KEPT MAN. He has no money. He's been playing along the whole time. Sun Xu spent all his energy flattering a man who couldn't even make a purchase decision. The author builds this so carefully. Every time Sun Xu dismisses Ms. Zhang's concerns, every time he interrupts her, every time he calls her dog "just an animal" — it's all foreshadowing. The woman is the one with power and money, and Sun Xu is too blind and sexist to see it. And then Zhong Suian, who just unlocked 200,000 yuan from the system, uses it to buy the villa herself. The system reward from the commission she earned. It's a beautiful loop — she helps someone, gets rewarded, and then uses that reward to pursue her own goal. The plot doesn't just move forward, it spirals upward. The pacing is also excellent. The tension builds from Zhong Suian's financial desperation, to the confrontation with Sun Xu, to the negotiation with Ms. Zhang, to the explosive reveal in the reception room. Each beat lands. I didn't want to stop reading. And the Mr. Wang reaction at the end — he immediately starts begging "Darling, please listen to my explanation" — is the perfect comedic button on the whole scene. The author doesn't even need to describe his humiliation. His own words do it.
Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
The story feel so fastpaced but its actually not, after 11 chapter. All i can grasp is the fl personality and other character who seems to have a great role in the future maybe... But i was hoping that this novel will turn well and exceeded my expectation.
A nice book about assassins and a dreaming future that everyone wants to have
thanks to the author for writing an excellent work. i love the novel,Lily is a kind, intelligent and brave girl.I can see my own shadow in her. At all times, I want to be a little nicer to others, but as a result, I am taken advantage of. we must have one's own opinions.
so yeah yeahthe lazy 5000 on here Just came on to be my own First Reviewer so far so Good Let's see.
this is too awsome .can't wait to see the next chapyer...
Very good novel so far with a super interesting plot however update stability is not the best, if this had more chapters and not over a week since a new one has dropped this would be the best novel on the app imo.
The story was kinda interesting, I would like to say that it's highly recommended for those readers who loves fantasy keep it ?hope it will become successful in a future
Interesting enough
The author tried to create something ? I hope he/she continues his/her writing
Hi Alekzi,Here I am, your biggest fan has returned!I like that you changed a lot of things and it's better than your previous book.Keep up the good work man!