I was a bit confused at first, but the story line draws you in. Adam seems to be making the best of his situation. Period and comma placement could use some work, but all in all; Great Story! Keep up the good work Author!
A book that has an actual decent plot and not one of those "MC can see through everything" or the "I sign up in a dark room by myself for 1,000 years and come out the strongest." Yet I don't see nearly as much people voting for it as they would for the others. Just a big let down to see what people want instead of good stories then they go and blame the APP.
This is what I think I deserve after all of my soul I have poured in to this. I rewrote 80k words and what you see now is the rewritten version. I can't say for sure that now this book is the best you have ever read but its the best I have ever written among all of my other works :DIf you have qns, criticism, praises, or anything else just reply to this XD
I absolutely loved this. it added such a nice aspect to the usual slice of life. i was very invested in the story and managed to finish im a day. overall 10/10
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Poetic, beautiful and moving. This book has everything going for it and more. I love it and I'm sure any fan of fantasy will as well. The vocabulary is vast and the writing quality is consistent.
I am a high school student, and I also work in the weekends. So, you can expect me to not post at times.This novel may have grammatical mistakes as I am not a professional. But I hope you stick around because I have a good feeling about this one. I don't focus too much on the system because it's more about Ares doing great things on his own. Hope you like it, this is a novel I have high expectations for.
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Just going to give 5 stars because I got good laugh out of reading the title wrong i read back pain instead of black Plain and was like i relate?
It's good. Proper grammar, no plot holes, pretty much everything you'd want in a good fic. Keep on reading..................................................................................................................................................
For those like to read good novel with story this is best choice. This novel is different from usual dungeon type novels which reveals around level up and heram. It gave more preference to story then any other thing ( which makes novel good to read ).
One thing I wise change is make chapters large ( while reading I feel like when I started to read and end in few seconds