I never gave an NTR novel more than one star but your first 2 arcs of the novel got me hooked before the third arc ruined it for me so 2 stars are the highest I can give an NTR novel and I don't mind you writing an NTR novel but plz set a tag beforehand.
cant wait for more chapters. really Good.
The best one so far amongst The New ones. Just hope it gets tons of New chapters to enjoy it.......
Brothers and sisters Webnovel actually saving you. They only give 8 free chapter, because they know this story is trash and not worth your coins and free pass.For someone that roaming jianghu long enough you will understand. This novel is like canon fodder young master; created to be trampled. So much overused cliches, It's not surprising that story development would be repetition of face slapping. Characters setting is westerner, i dont even know that our brother in western call their friend full name "Fynn Taylor" every single time. Honestly, it would be better to keep the original chinese name.For someone that still persistence or even enjoy reading this novel. Im proud of you.. you like eating pineapple pizza right?
[Reviewed on: 06-03-2022][Reading status: 8th chapter][Strength: Face slapping, strong character development, fusion of two genres][Weakness: Well, according to me, it's super cliche cultivation novel]- The title says it all, literally half of the expected plotline.- A possibly weak-to-strong MC- Cliche cultivation settings and world- Magic, pills, martial arts are an expected part along with explicit scenes- A lot of girls, cultivation, energy and the goal to get stronger- However I personally felt that the initial chapters had nothing different to offer. It followed traditional formation and plot to set the ground. - In the midst of ocean of eastern cultivation books what this one has to offer? The NPC theme from prior life seemed to be faded after transmigration, diverting back to old cliche plot.If you're interested in eastern cultivation then this is for you. [Additional remarks]The author has improved visibly compared to his previous books.The flow and pace is good, every scene execution is done wonderfully Talking about grammar and stuff, don't worry over that.
Excuse me but I have fallen into your novel, now I'm leaving but first I want to tell you that it has caught my attention.You may probably be angry, so I apologize in advance.Well I go back to reading, cover this place so I don't fall again while I'm reading.
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This story moves crazy slow. The lack of progress and constant POV switches to fairly unimportant characters is getting really tiring. Dialogue is also used or exposition at least half the time, and it makes everyone sound fake.
Oh, and like so many of these types of stories, the MC knows literally everything for essentially no reason.
This "super intelligent" MC got killed in a completely avoidable way and lucked into getting revived at the start. It's not a great character.
Decently entertaining story, but not good writing.
This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.
the novel is very good, and you can even fantasize, but the main character is very good and the author is the best because he conveyed the psychological struggle of a man and a dragon in his body, so I wonder what will happen next, the author is handsome and more chapters on the dragon please
all I can say is that, author-san if you are reading this, work like a zombie and upload 20 chapters, no... 50 or more chapters a day. I don't care how you do it. Just, kidding! that's my way of saying of how great your novel is!?
LISTEN AUTHOR ---- IF YOU ARE WRITING THE NOVEL ,.JUST DON'T DROP THE NOVEL OK JUST DON'T DROP OR ELSE HEAVEN WILL FALL IN YOU !!!!! MARK MY WORDS.......??
Was this story dropped? If it is, then that was really sad I am reading all the eternal series by author I'm done with the first two..hope this will continue