interesting storyline, I love the plot and it's descriptions. keep it up
The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.
A little bit of weird start to the story, and woosh jumped right into action almost like the two was conducting an experiment of some sort of soul/life energy travel with a little hint of romance waiting in the outer edges.
Here's the author shamelessly giving himself 5 stars, hehe.
Very good but too slow. I read 70 chapters but the story has been going on just 3 days Please fix it. It's a shame to ruin such a good story with this.
I love how descriptive and vivid the story is. You can really tell the author put a lot of work into it. I hope the Author continues this amazing story, I will continue to support it.
Good story. Captivated from the first few chapters.
Overall its good, i love mind game, but you must grow your writing. Overall 3.4I waiting this character name Harith negs fodder like Dazai, Sora, and Fyodor. Thi character manipulation and strategy its good tbh
Read the early chapter and it already hooking me up.nice world building and character development.i cant wait for the next update. Please, keep up Author!
Interesting story so far can't wait to see where it goes
Thanks for the story, interesting to start out and see where it goes.
Review written at chapter 70. The world so far has a lot of fun and unique traits that set it apart from similar settings. The story is developing well. The MC doesn’t squander their unique abilities. You’ll find plenty of books with some kind of, MC exclusive, stat building method. Some go too far and pump the MC too much, some don’t utilize it at all. The author strikes a good balance of power scaling, where mc doesn’t become unrealisticly OP. A little sidebar: l appreciate the little comedic undercuts to otherwise serious moments. I only put a 4 star on character design because of the girlfriend. I don’t dislike quick relationships per say, but it does leave something to be desired for a slower burning relationship. To reiterate, I do like the female lead. The world background sets up some good mysteries that don’t have to take the main focus of every arc. Speaking of arcs, I really hope the tournament arc doesn’t get too drawn out