The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.
Although the novel started out great and was really interesting, after a while it fell short. After about 30-35 chapter in the novel in started to feel bland and boring.
Ok I reviewed already for my pre evaluation but after reading only the first chapter I'm ABSOLUTELY HOOKED this novel is interesting well written and has a mysterious quality all it's own it's so flippin good I had to stop by and rate again I love the way this author writes hes not afraid to cuss or get into gritty detail and all of his sentences are well flowing and eloquently spoken I have read 1 chap and I love this book??
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So overall a really nice series so far. Let me start out by saying that while the grammar can use work, I just personally powered through and a few chapters in I got used to it and could understand, so it may not apply to you, but if you are like me and have some tolerance you can get used to it.Now onto the main part of the review.Basically this is a modern romance with cultivation and a system thrown in. The story takes place on a convenient parallel earth where polygamy is legal and accepted. The overall concept has been done before, but I like this one and there is one big reason for that, we don't have to go through the cringe-inducing struggles of getting the women to accept the MC having a harem, don't get me wrong in a modern setting it is more realistic, yet it still makes me cringe.I was going to do a longer review but got distracted and forgot what I had planned out so I'll stop here. Sorry for the incomplete review, but I still hope it helps.
Its a good story. I personally like the gamer and the MCs stories the most. All the other plots seem to be pushing LGBT views down my throat though. Like one story arc happens then we switch over to the MC and get his take on the surprise reveal of the gay couple and the trans person. Where he plays the straight white male, and then all of a sudden his female assistant (which was purposely made to be more competent than him) starts making excuses for her candidates. Ending with the MC being subtly manipulate into changing his straight views on the sexes and into this female leads more gender neutral ones. At this point I dropped the story. I didn't want to read something where there isn't a single person I can relate to. And that the only straight male (MC), was only created to play the fool in this story. The constant POV switches didn't help either.