Spencer_Boudrey
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I cant take this book seriously. so my man artic dies by helping a woman, sO what does he fucking do after his transmigiration?!?! Thats right! NOT ONLY HELP A FUVKING WOMAN, GOVE HER KNOWLEDGE. precious Knowledge that is literally how people gain power!!! Oh uea dont forget the fucking broken power system. the power system is based on “laws” which can give you numerous abilities given how knowledgable you are, so if you arent seeing the problem here ill tell you, THE KNOWLEDGE IS SHARABLE, IF THERES A SINGLE GOD OUT THERE THEN THE ENTIRE WORLD CAN BE INFESTED BY GODS. I mean sure there are law againts doing this, this is kept in order by the other gods but theres nothing they could do if someone decides to do this, well untill its too late atleast. what stopping a man from printing books and books of knowlede Of Laws that can help you become a god and spread them across the world?! By the time Anyone noticed itll be too fucking late. if iM to talk about charectors, all ill say is thier dogshit, plain, and unintresting im every way possible. Hell the main charector is pretty much a Robot whos knowledable in Random shiT, who Knows why. The typos In the bigining of the storys are inumarable and countless. this is not helped by the fact How author changes Names and titles every other fucking chapter for no absolutefucking reason. All in all I lost a few fucking iq points. i dont Want to put the author down in any way shape or form but All im saying is, its a intresting idea but The author stumbles on the execution terribly. this is for the first few cHapters btw, so no doubt the autho got as the chapters went but i Just cant stand the First 50.
To Warmaisach,I've been reading this novel since it was a trial read. It has only gotten better and better. While I would love to be able to read more than two chapters a day, please don't rush the chapters. The current quality of the novel is absolutely amazing. Thank you for your awesome story and I look forward to being able to read it until it's conclusion. (Which hopefully will not happen for a long time :))
I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)
