Finally! Something different! Not "CEO daddy, CEO mumy, CEO something, etc..." I loved movies like "Equilibrium
Translation Quality: 5. Nothing wrong here.Stability of Updates: 5. Nothing wrong here.Story Development: 1 star. Oh boy. Hey, let me ask you something. If you received a potion (drug) that'd help you lose 20 lbs a day, would you be worried or thankful to the maker of it? (Thankful, obviously. There's no way losing 20 lbs in a single day'd have any adverse effects, right?)What would you do if you found a drunk woman on the streets, and she wasn't sober enough to give you her number or address to send her home? (Bring her to a hotel, obviously. It's not like you're pretty much right next to a police station...) Overall, Story Development is absolutely the worst, I'm not even exaggerating. Character Design: 1. Extremely forced, the characters in this novel are the least realistic thing I've seen on this site, excluding the R18 fanfictions. See (Story Development).World Background: 1. Urban fantasy, face slapping-esque, harem novel. With dumbed-down characters, to boot. I love urban fantasy, but this is just the same cultivation-modern day novel recycled over and over again, and these novels all tend to be horrible. It is horrible, actually.2.6 stars. Lowest possible rating I can give in terms of the story, it's just crap.
From what I’ve seen in sixty chapters, this could be a gem. It feels like there just the right amount of humanity in the main character mixed with just the right amount of psychopath. I’d really like for this to be updated more. It was a fun read.
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