Ygreat5ni
TLDR: A harem and face smacking story that is unique enough to be enjoyable with the harem being written in a way that I like despite hating most harem stories. Mostly just hoping the author keeps that going and doesnt fall into the pit of making his entire story about the harem, as the power scaling and how the powers work is really interesting and deserves to be the focus. Honestly speaking, this is a good story, and although harems usually irritate me, im willing to give this one a chance as it is handled a bit better than others. It's more like a Monarchy palace or seems to be, with one main girl and probably others kinda like concubines. At least that's what im kinda getting the vibe of, which I can deal with. About the story itself, his system is interesting but not totally ridiculous (yet, as of chapter 24, which is all that's there for now), and the scenes are really enjoyable. There are a lot of questions that really just get swept up under the rug, but hopefully, those will be answered at some point later, so not really a negative. One thing id like to see is that the story remains the focus and to request the author to keep the "Special" chapters as bonuses and not the point of the story, and the story itself is very well done and interesting. I have a good feeling about the story, and I'll update my review if anything changes.
I was really I trusted by the book and it was good all up until he brought the girl along. At this point the charcte has been “ asleep” for thousands of years if not hundreds of thousands of years. So at that point with all th suffering he has gone through basically torture I would think he would be an emotionless person literally after all he has gone through. But for certain people I would say it is a good book ,got to chapter 24. But sorry author the girl ruined it for me.
"Whats potion master?" Jester asked.
"So that's how it is, how many months have you felt this problem?"
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"What a good idea, you know you are going to die, so I might as well drag on the fear of dying, besides, I want you to watch your precious village go up in flames, along with the screams of your people." Reginold said coldly.
Your sister Hope made you a beautiful flower which I'm going to keep here with you. Please take care of yourself for mommy and sweetie mommy will always love you.
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Mo Li was more than grateful for the fact that he had not questioned her or forced her to speak up about the truth. Yet, Byron's magnanimity and unwavering concern, despite knowing what had happened, had caused her to feel even more undeserving of him. After all that had happened, she was indeed incredibly blessed to still be able to remain as his wife.
other members near by was also puzzle then ruby spoke "wolf gave a cloneing technique to me so I can learn faster and once they disappear they gave me the knowledge the clone learn and sometime hurts when there a physical change to the body but the one on screen is the real me while their 2 others so it 4 in total but I'm the one in school while the other 3 do their training with wolf and study while I been with you guys in school so I or we can be in other place while learning many things and that how I cut short on learning in a short amount time to learn most a huntress need and all the knowledge wolf can give me" sounded with proud and happy
Raiser yang berada di lantai sekarang bangkit dan menunjukkan wajah arogannya lagi yang membuatku berpikir ' apakah setelah kematian, kemudian wajah arogannya menghilang ? '
And all that glitters is gold
