Within Our World

Fast-paced and average. Sounds like a worse copy of some good novels I like in similar setting/system. His passives is a plot armor that appears when he needs it as well. Only the thing someone else mentioned - that schemes and lies are shown in a unique way - is perhaps something worth reading for, but I am not interested in this atm.My opinion is subject to change in future if I ever decide to pick it up again. But I will pass on it for now. The novel didn't captivate me at all.

Its a meh fanfic. Nothing really different from other MMO fics out there. Only thing I find disappointing is the MC suddenly trusts Silent Night right after he was betrayed. Then she takes up as much screen time as our MC where I gave up continuing the fic. Freaking romantic interests killed the story for me.

The beginning was terrible and forced humor. But it does get better after 30 chapters or so. I want this Translated just for the sake of who the Author is. Sure his previous work wasn't the best but I can also see improvement in his writing. Characters feel better and more alive.

this novel is the best author i really like this and it has all the elements I like (eg:World travelling, cultivation, harem ,system etc) idk why it is underrated but I just want to say that to the author Thank you for this wonderful novel and please don't drop me this ??

Bad grammar but not to the point of being unreadable. Good ideas for the erotic contents that cover various fetishes, but they're told in a way which is lack in details. As a result, readers can't get immersed enough to fully enjoy it.

A great story with a main character which is not overpowered from the second he the sword.                                                .