This story is quite shockingFirst Chapter it looks like one of those System type stories.The only difference is this one is full of Uncensored Gore
It's actually fun for the 100 chaps because you can still see the essence of the Download System, however, as the story progress, it became more and more transparent.The MC used to scan others and download, but now around 100+ chaps, it's basically non-existent.It's still a good one to pass the time, but it's not for me because I felt that the plot just forgot the purpose of the Download System since the MC doesn't even use it that much as before. I felt like it's kind of a different one than before and it's not as interesting now.
Ch. 63 Nie rozumiem
Lol, isn't that Xie Lian and Hua Cheng from "Heaven official's blessing" on the cover?
The update is slow but I love the story line.
I am baffled by some of the decisions of this story. When selecting to introduce a female character, they know are spying on them, but yet main characters are just chosing to ignore it.They start acting stupid, and gets bossed around by a secretary... They are supposed to be smart, VERY smart, and have a large base of knowledge to base their decisions on. But yet, it just derails the story in my opinion. It feels like the focus just shifts.
I really love this story and it cool stories
This has now become one of my favourite reading . I was just to read until chapter 10 at most but I became addicted and couldn't stop anymore. The pace is somewhat slow but for me it's perfect, and every characters has his own unique personality(I particularly like those crazy ones tho). Finally an Mc who is smart and is not handsome at all☺.the author take his time to show us the personality of the characters he introduced, their interactions with the mc and develop them.The world building is great too with no plot holes (not one I noticed ) for now.The writing and the story become better the more you read.For actions and fight, it doesn't have much for now(ch 60) since the mc is still weak The best point of this novel for me are the interactions with different characters and their unique personality. Ps I really was not expecting that pot twist at ch 30 Ps I hope biana Is the fl Anyway, I have high expectations for this book.Sorry if my review is not that good since I'm not used to do it. This novel need more support tho, idk why it has not been noticed by now. I wish I could give more than 5 star. What I don't like about this book is that I have to wait for new chapters now??????
This story plus your imagination
Interesting story the plot is very good, the protagonist's personality is amazing, harem I don't know if there will be a heroine or will appear later on I hope so
Today I'm tired so I wont leave as detailed a review as I normally do.The main problem with this book is that it is painful to read.It is not emotionally painful to read, and not badly written painful to read.It is 'why the hëll did THIS happen?' painful to read.Like I said, I'm tired, don't wanna explain much, so I'll give just one example.MC is born again in a disgüstingly mütilated body. Fine.Young master is törturing her. Okay.Wants her to get räped. Fine.Lacky comes in, thinks she's too disgüsting. Okay.Young master gets distracted. MC tries to escape.The 'loyal' servant of the MC UNEXPECTEDLY shouts when he sees she's escaping, alerting the young master. He'd been watching leisurely btw. And he's loyal, according to the story. I kid you not.All of this is okay.Then there's the system. I don't like how it works. At all.Why 5 stars?Because it's yuri. And the story can improve as it goes on. I'll probably come back to read it once it has more chapters.
I think this is a good story, it just isn't hitting a spot for me personally. I think from what I have read so far the story is an enjoyable read and is going to build up to some really good things but at the moment this story isn't really hooking me in enough to read everyday. I think that the writing quality is good the characters are good and premise is good I just think that you should wait until chapter 50-80 to come to a definitive conclusion if you like the book or not. reading the Author's other's work I have a strong feeling this story is going to be really good.